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Sobriety

Sobriety Somber sobering. Sadness surpasses surprise. Silent seclusion. Poetry Form Ekphrasis (art inspired) Haiku with alliteration. Inspired by Brian Strand’s Imagine Contest http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Automat_(painting)

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Date: 10/17/2009 6:07:00 PM
Super piece Dane Ann, all the best in Brian's contest >> James
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:35:00 AM
sad. Light & Love girl friend
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Date: 10/13/2009 6:01:00 PM
Good use of alliteration for a creative view. I really like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 10/10/2009 5:38:00 PM
A beautiful meaningful Haiku Dane! I've not got the hang of just how to write haikus yet. But I am in no hurry. Good one here, you have written. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/9/2009 5:26:00 PM
Hello Dane Ann my friend. I see you are becoming quite the great Haiku writer. Wishing you the best in Brian's contest. Big hugs hope your day is going better now. Have a wonderful love filled,fun,inspirational weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:09:00 PM
Excellent inspiration can be found in this great write, Dane! I hope the people who need to hear these words read this poem. Love you! Carolyn
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:42:00 AM
Again, nice form with the same letter Haiku.... Creative.....:JP]
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:43:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Dane.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/9/2009 3:23:00 AM
Like the alliteration. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2009 2:42:00 AM
Nice work Dane, this one was a lovely masterpiece. Best of luck in the contest...Raul
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