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August 6, 2024, entered in Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title Vol. 45 contest

August 19, placed 2nd

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Sobering


When I’m gliding blithely through my days,
Life, with its blunt, disconcerting ways, 
interrupts my peace with sobering realities
that heighten my awareness and bring me to my knees
uttering praise for being spared or, for others, urgent pleas.

The fifteen obituaries in the paper one day last week
were all for people younger than I. Naturally, I seek
to enjoy a long life. I presume those people wanted that too!
I pray thoughts of mortality won’t leave me with a morbid view
but will motivate me to pursue goals, both old and new.

When news reports reveal the true state of the world,
it never fails: New hair-raising terrors are unfurled.
I shiver just thinking of future generations~~
grandkids, their kids, and theirs . . .  and the deliberations
they must maneuver through to maintain solid foundations. 

Sobering realities will continue to assault my peace of mind,
but due to a degree of late-in-life wisdom, I’m inclined
to prayerfully do what I can to fix or eliminate a situation, 
then turn it over to the One in the highest station.
The Lord has power over every complication.
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Sobering" write. Life is a journey short or long for each of us... Have a blessed day writing away...........
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Thanks so much, Paula! Janice
Agustin Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually experience "Sobering realities ... to assault my peace of mind." Thanks so much for your constant uplifting comments. God bless you.
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Bless you too, Beata. Thank you for this wonderful response to my poem. Janice
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, Janice! I enjoyed it immensely.
Canerdy Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Edward, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
May Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 3:32 PM
You crafted this poem very nicely Janice, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
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