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Sober Bottles

The bottles looked sober, waiting till it's over. In between quaffs and hiccups he mumbled that he had staggered and fell many times. That he'd tried to walk society's line, follow proper paths of places and climes. But he couldn't help displeasing anyone, for to him blazing trails are never crimes. With zonked sobriety, he grinned and winked at his beer, asked it conspiratorially: "Must my self-worth desperately cling to a crag that is loosening off perilously from the edge of other people's opinions, and crash down, trampled upon cruelly?" The bottles looked sober, waiting till it's over.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/14/2011 7:44:00 PM
loved the rhyming and the beginning line, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/7/2019 4:53:00 AM
Thanks, Poet.
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Date: 7/7/2019 4:52:00 AM

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