Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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Soar Up To The Sky

Written: December 13, 2023
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If the ocean's water
were used as writing ink for pens
to write down our words of praise
the ocean would eventually dry up
before it might be put in writing.

evil will triumph 
if the righteous remain silent
Inner defect causes blindness
success depends on action
stand up and do what
you realize is right 
 
raise exertion level
a smidgeon suffices 
to allow notions of impetus
you can then sleep well
your pick is akin to lacerations
requires precise timing
curious but uncertain. 
blind attrition is pointless. 

reach for stars
obtain an aerial view of the world
wave farewell to the land
live easily a prospective granted by
you are misusing beauty
greet the passing clouds.

forsake worries and avert your gaze
fear is a foe you must overcome
soar high and be wise.

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 16, 2023 at 12:52 PM "Take me to the moon"...that's where I am now after reading this magnificent masterpiece that is another Fav for me. "reach for stars obtain an aerial view of the world wave farewell to the land live easily a prospective granted by you are misusing beauty greet the passing clouds." I loved especially this verse. So pleased to read you!

Bill Baker December 15, 2023 at 5:10 PM A strong and needed message, my dear friend. Thank you for help us to overcome that which robs to world of the love and wisdom we may offer when mindfully sharing through our poetry. This reminds me of what Johnathon Livingston Seagull said, "Fly straight up and understand the meaning of Truth and Love." A FAV for excellence. Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers December 14, 2023 at 6:15 PM Your poem is a very beautiful and evocative piece that captures the essence of the power of words and the beauty of nature. The imagery and emotions conveyed through your words are truly captivating and heartwarming. Your poem is a testament to the beauty of language and the human spirit. - Blessings, Daniel!

Silent One December 14, 2023 at 11:33 AM evil will triumph if the righteous remain silent Inner defect causes blindness success depends on action stand up and do what you realize is right .. so true my friend and that is why i am never silent when it matters... an excellent poem with an important message..

Jay Narain December 14, 2023 at 9:30 AM Think high, ignore pessimistic thoughts. They are clue to reach the sky,

Hilda Greenhough December 14, 2023 at 6:51 AM New Year is not far away. Your poem is a perfect prompt for a resolution. I'll be reviewing it..

Vijay Pandit December 14, 2023 at 6:51 AM evil will triumph if the righteous remain silent---reach for stars obtain an aerial view of the world--a potent warning and potent words of inspiration, my friend.

Ink Empress December 13, 2023 at 10:12 PM This is such an easy write for me to comprehend. You write free verse so well and the opening lines in this really drew me in to read more. Seamless flow of words and you’ve states as always such profound truths which would get readers to reflect and ponder upon. I really love the lines “ evil will triumph if the righteous remain silent” so true but we still see so many staying silent in so many situations where one needs to not stay silent. “ reach for stars“ i love that stanza. Pleasure readn

Hiya Sharma December 13, 2023 at 6:49 PM This is such a deep and heartfelt poem dear Sotto. As always, your words are so profound & exquisite diving in the depths of wisdom.. And also some sombre emotions. How poignantly you've said that "If the ocean's water were used as writing ink for pens..of praise the ocean would eventually dry up before..in writing" Wow, I can feel those layers of darkness in the subsequent verse as well.. "reach for stars obtain an aerial view of the world" Perspective truly plays a vivid role! Beautifully done

Paula Goldsmith December 13, 2023 at 6:24 PM A wonderful write/ending/pretty picture. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Unseeking Seeker December 13, 2023 at 6:08 PM Wise words as always, flowing from the depths of your soul, SP. Enjoyed your gentle yet forceful musings.