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Soar

~Soar~ Form: tanka Started: 4/21/11 Completed: 4/22/11 By: Miranda Lambert Contest: Wow me in 5 lines Soar willow warbler Alas, winter time has passed Spring blossom awaits Soar home delicate creature See the lull your song creates

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/18/2011 8:56:00 AM

Nicely poetic and descriptive. If the contest is still running I wish you good luck. Regards, Robert.

Cory Long

Date: 5/4/2011 5:15:00 PM

this is a well written tanka. cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 2:45:00 PM

This is very nice, Miranda. I came here to also tell you that I made a blog to promote your contest and to let Soup know of a problem with your picture not showing. ARe you aware of that? YOur picture disappeared from the contest and I hope you can fix it. I just know it is going to get a lot more hits if the picture is there. LUv, Andrea

Cory Long

Date: 4/22/2011 12:12:00 PM

nice, good luck in the contest! cory