Soar

~Soar~
Form: tanka
Started: 4/21/11
Completed: 4/22/11
By: Miranda Lambert
Contest: Wow me in 5 lines

Soar willow warbler
Alas, winter time has passed
Spring blossom awaits
Soar home delicate creature
See the lull your song creates
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 18, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Nicely poetic and descriptive. If the contest is still running I wish you good luck. Regards, Robert.
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May 4, 2011 at 5:15 PM
this is a well written tanka. cory
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April 27, 2011 at 2:45 PM
This is very nice, Miranda. I came here to also tell you that I made a blog to promote your contest and to let Soup know of a problem with your picture not showing. ARe you aware of that? YOur picture disappeared from the contest and I hope you can fix it. I just know it is going to get a lot more hits if the picture is there. LUv, Andrea
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April 22, 2011 at 12:12 PM
nice, good luck in the contest! cory
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