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Universe’s mysteries Underscore Shaking beliefs To the core My heart is branded Forevermore Because it’s you that I adore AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 14, 2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/14/2018 12:15:00 PM

Ooh, short, sweet and romantic; wonderful pen.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/14/2018 9:11:00 AM

Beautifully composed, Line. Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, Carolyn, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/14/2018 8:32:00 AM

Lovely sweet lines! <3 xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/14/2018 5:13:00 AM

the adoration for the mysterious Greatness....!/// nice monorhyme.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thanks, Mahtab. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/14/2018 1:19:00 AM

Universe's mysteries do tend to shake us up, if we are paying attention. Nice monorhyme,my friend, but what are we doing up?

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 10:04:00 AM

LOL. The muse's clock is out of whack. Line xx