Soaking

soaking wet trees, despondent
leaves hang depressingly low
steady rain water torture
— gothically stark

11/12/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 8:29 PM
We had snow all day here, Kim, it is interesting how we would love to send some of it to California, and they could use it and your rain. Gothically stark - tells us everything we need.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 9:10 PM
For sure! Not fair...the not sharing...if we could we would
Faulkner Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:41 PM
I, being on the west coast, have the opposite problem with all the wildfires, but too much rain would indeed be torture, well penned!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:43 PM
The fires are worse! May God be with you all!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Today we have the same. Could be depressing if I let it. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:42 PM
Not a day to be out! Stayed in...made a nice meal for me and the husband :)
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