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Soaked In Dew

When velvet night is soaked in dew along bright rims of starlit thread, prayers chime a tune in revue away from hours of black and dread. Along bright rims of starlit thread, the fragrant winds blow chamomile, away from hours of black and dread to greet dawn’s flute with lambent feel. The fragrant winds blow chamomile, leaves draping the knolls in full hum, to greet morn’s flute with lambent feel as heart ripples while dusk succumbs. Leaves draping the knolls in full hum prayers chime a tune in revue, as heart ripples while dusk succumbs when velvet night is soaked in dew. Gautami Phookan's Dabble in Poetry Forms 3/17/2014

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:47:00 PM
nice win... PD
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Date: 4/2/2014 6:07:00 AM
Congrats nette on your fine win in my contest. It was such a pleasing one to read, a richly worded piece of poetry and 'Pantoum' is a form one rarely comes across here..Thank you sooo much dear for your participation, always an honor.. love to you... and hugs too :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 5:20:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your win. Beautifully written, enjoyable read. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 4/2/2014 1:53:00 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,nette
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Date: 4/2/2014 12:09:00 AM
Nette:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/1/2014 10:52:00 PM
Hey Nette, I like this poem and the form is one worth trying. Congratulations on your glory. Cheers!
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Date: 3/23/2014 4:05:00 PM
Hi Nette, this is a beautiful poem; form tackled with ease; right choice of words; touching imagery. // paul
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Date: 3/22/2014 7:49:00 AM
This has such a peaceful, serene feel. Your words are as calming as rain chimes.
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Date: 3/21/2014 6:58:00 PM
I love the rhythm and flow to this Nette descriptive and exquisite pen hugs
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:53:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed my by the bay poem, i loved writting this one it's a very personal work, loved your poem also it's beautiful and expressive. cheri
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Date: 3/20/2014 10:16:00 AM
A lovely image depicted here Nette..
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Date: 3/20/2014 6:36:00 AM
Hi Nette... I'm sad not to post my new poems from the past few months. I am busy in school. I miss you all.. :) I love every time I read your poems.
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:45:00 PM
gracefully flowing poem, nette. Is it for the forms contest?
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:39:00 PM
The beauty and tranquility of nature can take us away from our darker hours and bring a comforting peacefulness. This poem was written so beautifully, Nette!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. I do appreciate it! Hugs :)
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:32:00 PM
Enjoyed the journey, such imagery on the travelers way reminds me of a beautiful dream that i would hate to wake up from, truly i loved it lady. thanks for your nice comment also cheri
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Date: 3/19/2014 6:17:00 PM
fantastic imagery Nette I love it hugs fav
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:40:00 PM
oh.. that's smell of chamomile.. it's like the breath of an angel... you are the one and only goddess of poems..!!! so admirable lines.. love the scents ,nette!! perfect!! ^__^ oxoxo
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:25:00 AM
You really have an affinity for creating excellent images. One of my favorites in this poem is " as heart ripples while dusk succumbs." That is impeccable. I'd like to thank you for choosing my work in your recent contest. All the best, Nette!
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:21:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Great ending to this soft and poetic work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:28:00 AM
- It is not only beautifully written ...... it smells so good :) - a beautiful picture, Nette! - I hope your day is happy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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