Soaked In Dew

When velvet night is soaked in dew along bright rims of starlit thread, prayers chime a tune in revue away from hours of black and dread. Along bright rims of starlit thread, the fragrant winds blow chamomile, away from hours of black and dread to greet dawn’s flute with lambent feel. The fragrant winds blow chamomile, leaves draping the knolls in full hum, to greet morn’s flute with lambent feel as heart ripples while dusk succumbs. Leaves draping the knolls in full hum prayers chime a tune in revue, as heart ripples while dusk succumbs when velvet night is soaked in dew. Gautami Phookan's Dabble in Poetry Forms 3/17/2014
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A   Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:47 PM
nice win... PD
Phookan Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 6:07 AM
Congrats nette on your fine win in my contest. It was such a pleasing one to read, a richly worded piece of poetry and 'Pantoum' is a form one rarely comes across here..Thank you sooo much dear for your participation, always an honor.. love to you... and hugs too :)
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:20 AM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your win. Beautifully written, enjoyable read. Regards Theresa xx
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:53 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,nette
A  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:09 AM
Nette:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
Dom Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 10:52 PM
Hey Nette, I like this poem and the form is one worth trying. Congratulations on your glory. Cheers!
Callus Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Hi Nette, this is a beautiful poem; form tackled with ease; right choice of words; touching imagery. // paul
Sirak Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:49 AM
This has such a peaceful, serene feel. Your words are as calming as rain chimes.
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:58 PM
I love the rhythm and flow to this Nette descriptive and exquisite pen hugs
Dunn Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 10:53 AM
So glad you enjoyed my by the bay poem, i loved writting this one it's a very personal work, loved your poem also it's beautiful and expressive. cheri
Carroll Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 10:16 AM
A lovely image depicted here Nette..
Cee Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 6:36 AM
Hi Nette... I'm sad not to post my new poems from the past few months. I am busy in school. I miss you all.. :) I love every time I read your poems.
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:45 PM
gracefully flowing poem, nette. Is it for the forms contest?
Deschler Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:39 PM
The beauty and tranquility of nature can take us away from our darker hours and bring a comforting peacefulness. This poem was written so beautifully, Nette!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. I do appreciate it! Hugs :)
Dunn Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Enjoyed the journey, such imagery on the travelers way reminds me of a beautiful dream that i would hate to wake up from, truly i loved it lady. thanks for your nice comment also cheri
Hamilton Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:17 PM
fantastic imagery Nette I love it hugs fav
Torres Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:40 PM
oh.. that's smell of chamomile.. it's like the breath of an angel... you are the one and only goddess of poems..!!! so admirable lines.. love the scents ,nette!! perfect!! ^__^ oxoxo
Ongado Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 11:25 AM
You really have an affinity for creating excellent images. One of my favorites in this poem is " as heart ripples while dusk succumbs." That is impeccable. I'd like to thank you for choosing my work in your recent contest. All the best, Nette!
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Ahhh!!! Great ending to this soft and poetic work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 8:28 AM
- It is not only beautifully written ...... it smells so good :) - a beautiful picture, Nette! - I hope your day is happy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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