Fathima Dawood Poet Sonnet

Soak It . . .

Pouring down its torrents of warmth
I look up to behove this splendid sight
Beaming love and happiness on all around
Earth drenching its goodness into the ground

Each flower peeps out its sensual soul
Slowly soaking in this serene whole
Each amphibian basking in delirious abandon
Coveting each moment in secret longing 

Avarice and greed, facetious noneties
All hold back and surrenders in peace
As I deliciously embrace this soul from above
Filled with wholesome and pure sublime love

Sauntering through this intimate slumber
Barefoot and unabashed I inhale this wonder

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March 5, 2009 at 9:25 AM Beautiful poem! Nice use of imagery and alliteration. The title is interesting. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen

Lena Townsend March 3, 2009 at 9:34 PM You are so talented. I love the way your words speak from your soul. I think this is a beautiful piece. I look forward to reading more of your work. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter February 22, 2009 at 4:37 AM Simply gorgeous Sonnet about nature. You put your heart and soul into this so beautifully. Great to read you again! Love, Shar

John Rhinem February 21, 2009 at 7:21 AM Smile~"Hello Precious & Gifted Fathima!!!"~What a truly 'Beautiful & Lovely Write' which You poured from "Your Heart & Soul" here dear!!!~So gentle and serene, and filled with images and thoughts of magnificent wonders~taking the reader unto a state and place, somewhat like paradise I would say!!!~"Excellent & Astonishing Write My Dear Friend!!!"~"Warmth & Blessings Always To You & Your Loves, John!":)

Arany P. February 21, 2009 at 3:29 AM beautifully written!! this form is so beautiful... but i can't seem to write anything... but yours sure give me inspiration!! lovely reading it.. ~ Arany