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So Time Being Bye

inner travelling 
                                   connecting outer spaces
                                       assembling words

                                sometimes mean good things
                              sometimes mean fruitless bucket
                                    fills with poor meaning

                                       if i have hurt here
                                      unknowingly to any 
                                           my apology  

                                     feeling fuel's ending 
                               needs to repair for some time
                                      so time being bye

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Paul Callus Date: 3/6/2016 7:32:00 AM You are a sincere and honest person, BL. You write from the heart and you mean well. Take care, my friend. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 10:55:00 AM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your much appreciation and for asking me to take care. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman Date: 3/5/2016 4:50:00 PM meaningful poetry BL Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 5:26:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Eve Roper Date: 3/5/2016 1:41:00 PM Good verse :-) a great poet sir! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 5:27:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/4/2016 7:26:00 PM Seems like you are reaching out to those of us here with this series of little verses, BL. You are a good person. Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 5:29:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your consideration and inspiring comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2016 4:28:00 AM - We all hurt others sometimes in life .... proven or unproven ..... we are humans with good and bad sides :) - Happy weekend dear Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 5:36:00 AM You are my lovely lovely friend so always you inspire me. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl