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…they say happiness comes from your thoughts …your attitude curled up inside And I can feel that is real as I have felt the shifting from one …to a different one as I walk against the wind …with head down I push my way sometimes the dark of wickedness rises and cannot the wrath of despair blacken your eyes from judgement given without seeing cannot your tears streak shattered skin at the sight of a child busted rejected by those they only wish for love cannot your throat constrict and songs of anguish escape your mouth when violence shadows your step I can feel that then I must turn to light ...with purpose fill my head gather what rainbows I remember for cannot the brine of the sea against the gentle curve of cheek expand your heart with glee cannot the snuggle of a child wrap a smile against your bruised breast to lighten the earth-bound burden cannot the song of the sun and the silver glow of the maiden moon put the stars in your hopeful eyes so then I lift my face to feel the gift ...to the heavens of rising hope and hold tight my cradled memories …wait for the clouds to dry their tears and my heart a feather floats free to dance my song of release... unfurled 1st Place Brian Strand All Yours 25 contest

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Date: 2/16/2021 6:16:00 AM
Wow Jeanne, what a medley of creative and fascinating poetic terms you use in this gem - I love it am am going to fave it. A first win was so deserved! Well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 2/16/2021 8:54:00 PM
Hi Jennifer. Wow, thank you for the fave. I am so happy it hit a note in your heart. Jeanne
Date: 2/13/2021 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place Jeanne, I can relate to your mood contrasts, brought on by outside influences, yet sometimes it can come from within ourselves, very emotive and uplifting ending, cheers David
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 2/16/2021 8:56:00 PM
Hey David...it is so true. sometimes it is in our own minds that we bring on the dark and it is that same that can choose to turn to the light. Thank you for stopping to comment.
Date: 2/11/2021 2:12:00 PM
Excellent poem Jeanne. Well written. I love it and the last stanza too :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 2/12/2021 12:51:00 PM
Hi Heidi, thank you...I hope it helps us to remember light follows the darkness when you let it in.
Date: 2/10/2021 4:53:00 PM
Jeanne, you have penned a very spiritual and lovely poem, love it _Constance
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 2/12/2021 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Constance. I'm looking forward to spending time reading and writing more.
Date: 2/10/2021 10:48:00 AM
WoW! Jeanne, What a well-written thought-provoking write. Well done. Thanks for stopping by my page. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 2/12/2021 12:52:00 PM
Hi Alexis, thanks for stopping by here too.
Date: 2/9/2021 11:50:00 PM
So ... They say stay in the lines, but there's always something better on the other side...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/9/2021 6:45:00 PM
I repeat what I said...

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