So Then She Flew

Little Ila of warm Indian waters
   was born without fins but with feathers.
“Fishes don’t fly,” they constantly told her
   wings in water are just a bother.

Tightly she wound them close to her
   and tried her best to keep up with peers
Oh, she once even tried to pluck out her feathers
   so she wouldn't look like a fish out of water.

But as she grew, her wings became larger
   and surely you realise, swimming became tougher.
Was she the only freak of nature, 
    she spent her time in depressed wonder

Then she met the turtle who seemed wiser 
    and gave her a dream of a sky up higher
There’d be hills and vales and trees and flowers
    and an eternally bright cloudless summer.

The journey was arduous but nothing could deter
    little Ila to defiantly labour up to the border
Then the sun shined in her eyes, struggle just a blur,
   with a leap of faith soon she flew… out of water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mandani Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:05 AM
This is nice. Send this to Children books publishers - it seems "Out of Water" here! Lol. Very nice. Congrats.
Ali Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Thank you Abdul:)
Chutani Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 5:04 AM
leap of faith helps one and all. Congrats Afroze. Mohan
Ali Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Thanks Mohan :)
Harper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Enjoyable little tale Afroze! You placed well. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576
Ali Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Thank you Sheri, I am glad you enjoyed it:)
Deschler Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Your poem inspires us to take risks in life and not just settle for what we're given at birth... This creative story was well told, Afroze. Great work!
Ali Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much for your appreciation Kelly.
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