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So that she gets more angry

Her red face firing eyes losing temper make me smile so that she gets more angry. Whenever she gives me a sudden kiss, talks lovingly.... something wrong I just frown. © kash poet(19th July 2011) ============================ Placement:None ;(July 2011) By:Kashinath karmakar Contest:Smiles and Frowns Sponsor:Michael J .Falotico

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Date: 7/24/2011 8:44:00 PM
Kash, where is your new poem I requested!! well, maybe tomorrow!!
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:51:00 PM
Oooh, I bet that drives her crazy, Kash. If you did that to me, I might punch out your lights. LOL But I rarely get angry, dear. Thanks for pointing out the limerick was listed as a haiku. I had to get a new computer mouse and I corrected it now. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:59:00 PM
that is weird that you smile at the sudden kiss. haha. But I get what you are saying here. LIke something is "fishy" Way to go with the smiles/frown contest.
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:30:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Kashinath. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:33:00 AM
A very interesting take on mixed emotions and expressions! You have avoided the obvious and come up with a stunning little write! Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 7/20/2011 1:03:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* “You Made Myself Smile Onside With This Loving Light-Hearted & Wonderful Poem My Dear Friend = Somehow Someway I Can Remember A Few Moments Such As This Amid My Own Life *^_^* == Excellent Amid A Breath of Love, Fresh Air & Beauty.” === My Love to You & Yours, Jasper *
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Date: 7/20/2011 12:59:00 AM
hmm pretty hot and cold eh? Very interesting take on the topic, Kashinath :) but yup, hmm sometimes it sure is intriguing why somebody would be smiling, haha something up their sleeves, perhaps? Just an extra "o" in losing-- and thanks for your comments :) Can you tell me the title of your football write? Thanks :D
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:17:00 PM
cute and smashing, kashi... come and visit; did one too! winning wishes to you, whoo! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:15:00 PM
heh... i bet it works. Stark and honest, very nice.
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