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So Soo Beautiful

a lighted candle
perfumed lavender
softly in a breeze 
i blow you a kiss
from the moon
stars they wink
saying goodnight

 to wonder
in the night
upon the face
lighting up in the dark
with a magical
soft smile

shines out beautiful
glowing feelings
 flickering caresses
deep emotions
warm in candlelight

softly whispering
sensual
a flower in spring
in a daisy chain 
in its circle
will you be
my angel

touching deep 
innermost depths
touched deeply
played on cupid's harp
the sweetest words
became music

cast in a spell
tugging at the chords 
enchantingly
touched 
my soul
sweetly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2017 8:40:00 AM
you are a natural
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Date: 9/3/2013 5:51:00 AM
i love jasmines..and even i love it when you write about roses..but daises are my favourites..So simple..wild and strong..Survivors of the wind..This is one of my favs of yours..to blow a kiss from the moon..Your thoughts are exquisitely crafted..Going tmfvs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/20/2013 11:19:00 AM
a smile upon the face in your return
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 6:28:00 AM
oh jasmines i will write something beautiful just for you
Date: 9/2/2013 6:53:00 PM
Deeply romantic Liam. I'm sure if I do decide to host a romantic contest you would certainly be a great contender.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/2/2013 7:35:00 PM
oh that sounds right up my street my old friend a lonely hearts forever whispers romantic dreams wonderful comment appreciated deeply

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