So Soo Beautiful

a lighted candle
perfumed lavender
softly in a breeze 
i blow you a kiss
from the moon
stars they wink
saying goodnight

 to wonder
in the night
upon the face
lighting up in the dark
with a magical
soft smile

shines out beautiful
glowing feelings
 flickering caresses
deep emotions
warm in candlelight

softly whispering
sensual
a flower in spring
in a daisy chain 
in its circle
will you be
my angel

touching deep 
innermost depths
touched deeply
played on cupid's harp
the sweetest words
became music

cast in a spell
tugging at the chords 
enchantingly
touched 
my soul
sweetly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 8:40 AM
you are a natural
Chircop Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 5:51 AM
i love jasmines..and even i love it when you write about roses..but daises are my favourites..So simple..wild and strong..Survivors of the wind..This is one of my favs of yours..to blow a kiss from the moon..Your thoughts are exquisitely crafted..Going tmfvs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 11:19 AM
a smile upon the face in your return
Mcdaid Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:28 AM
oh jasmines i will write something beautiful just for you
Mohammed Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Deeply romantic Liam. I'm sure if I do decide to host a romantic contest you would certainly be a great contender.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:35 PM
oh that sounds right up my street my old friend a lonely hearts forever whispers romantic dreams wonderful comment appreciated deeply
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