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Example for my contest.

So Oft I Cry

Four score and twenty years 
I rinsed my lids- so many tears 
So oft I sigh
 
To life anew- firsts breathe 
To life lost- ye mourn a death 
So oft they die 

Twenty years and forty score 
I'll weep again, at least once more 
So oft I cry
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Agustin Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Thanks for this example. What matters most is that God gives us genuine joy; and then He wipes our tears as we trust Him do so. God bless you.
Dutta Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 12:55 PM
'So oft I cry' So true . That's Life.
Poteet Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 8:58 PM
We are all crying on the inside even w/o the tears that bring release. Rough times, these past few weeks and back through the isolation of COVID. Touching piece, Charles.
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Great example, thank you it helps. hugs eve
Chutani Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:10 AM
Charles, quite a serious subject of life & death. Will try. Thanx for this example.
Kendrick Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Interesting work. Not sure I understand exactly the meaning. Forty score and twenty would be 820 years so I know you are not talking about living that long. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the visit by my page. My family and I are well we have come thus far without coming down with the virus and I hope that we don't and I hope it soon goes away or we get a vaccination. Sara
Michael Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Very good... once more would be perfect...especially with good health...
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 6:10 PM
this is amazing, charles. So heartfelt and poignant. thanks for this example.
Messina Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Andrea
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Wonderful, emotive write, Charles! Thank you for the example. You have inspired me to give it a try...xx Rhonda
Messina Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 9:38 PM
Thank you, Rhonda
La France Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Charlie, wonderful write and a good example for your contest, now, I know exactly what you are looking for _Constance
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 7:47 AM
fabulous example for the contest, will give it a try Charles thanks for the inspiration:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Awesome write--so well articulated, Charlie!
Hawkins Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 10:48 PM
A very emotional and touching poem. Thank you ... Shirley
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