So Near yet still so Far


These old memories and desires in my 
lonely heart have never made me feel 
alone since we have been apart,
I have searched and searched but 
never thought it was in vain,
To soothe my tortured soul, the sweet 
and treasured moments from our time 
together were dissected part by part,
But now, time has brought me to a place,
a place of pleasure and pain.


In a crowded conference room, in a 
different country, I never thought we 
would meet face to face,
And that I would be unable to speak
as my words refused to flow,
So, step by step, I moved away as 
time said,” This is not the time or place,
 so continue with the show”.
Feelings of turmoil took over as 
the awareness began to sink in, 
Both not knowing what the other 
was thinking,

In a shocked and confused state, 
my soul strangely felt a sense of relief, 
My eyes felt refreshed, and my heart 
was racing.
At last, the long-awaited reunion 
seemed possible,
But some commitments just couldn’t 
be broken, 
And our dream would again be frozen,

It wasn’t written in our destiny, 
as again up came that invisible bar,
And once more the little voice whispered, 
So near yet still so far.




By Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/21/2024 8:57:00 AM
A well constructed poem a pleasure to read .Well done.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/21/2024 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. So please you liked it. Have a great weekend.
Date: 9/19/2024 6:17:00 AM
Aww shucks. Like you say, so close. Of course, there's still time ...
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/19/2024 11:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support Tom, means a lot. Have a fabulous day/evening my friend. Stay Blessed.
Date: 9/17/2024 9:18:00 PM
This is a splendid poem about love lost. I enjoyed the story, albeit sad.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/18/2024 11:43:00 AM
Hi Hilda, thank you so much for your kind words and support, it means a lot to me. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
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