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So Naive

naivety in reign my nascent science of love how I got duped into love’s vitamin mail order business. so naive! Just thought she was true truly an angel, with wings to fly me around, and lift me to higher places, but just a little later, subdued and dejected, it dawns on me in retort, indeed, a monster in my life, my thoughts of peril, an uphill attack, no maneuverability, an untenable defense! dragging in reticence, overwhelmed, I pondered on possible options, leaving n not turning back, it dawns on me once again, it is expensive to fight, throw your might, lose your night, just to a loosing battle

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Date: 9/12/2013 12:39:00 AM
Congrats on winning the second place. Hasan
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Date: 9/10/2013 7:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 9/9/2013 8:48:00 PM
love the win...................SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:41:00 PM
Hassan, congratulations on your win...Linda
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2013 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:14:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:20:00 PM
Fellow Soupians, I would be glad to take your comments...... positive criticisms.
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:33:00 PM
Hello Hassan, I came to read another poem from you... please look me up when you have a new one.. looking forward.. xox~ Linda
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Hassan Haji
Date: 6/8/2013 11:24:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much!

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