So Long

Alone without you around,
Why can't you just stay here with me,
I know its best that we separate,
But I can't handle this feeling of being free,
You've help through tough times,
Times where I felt stressed,
Relaxed me when I needed you,
Especially the times I was a mess,
Calmed me down,
From when I was angry and pissed,
I HATE YOU!
Why does it have to end like this?,
I miss your scent,
I loved the way you smelled,
Nobody knew what was on my mind,
But only, ONLY you were the one that can tell,
I miss holding you,
Inhaling you,
Feeling you inside me,
Can I have just one more time?,
I need you!
Please don't leave me,
I don't want you to go,
I'm sorry,
Will you come back?,
No! No! No!
I don't want you,
I can't have you,
You keeping hurting me,
Giving you too many chances,
This time I have to leave,
Because if I don't do it now,
Then you will only stop me from trying to achieve,
You kept in the dark,
While my girls played in the light,
I lost time dealing with you,
When I could of done something else with my life,
Today I end this with a goodbye,
I hope we never meet again,
I'm taking my life back,
And ending us as friends,
No more smelling like you,
No more losing my breath,
I am finally free,
Until that day comes upon my death,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/3/2014 7:28:00 PM
new i can tell. but you have a taste for poetry. your english isn't as bad as some beginners. but your emotions are yet as echos being echoed and echoed again and again. your in the twilight zone and it may take a while to get out of the misery. it only gets worse. keep writing great words come from those who are hurting.
Login to Reply
Gibbs Avatar
Jawaan Gibbs
Date: 2/3/2014 11:12:00 PM
Thank you man that means a lot coming from someone who doesn't even know me. Thank you for the advice as well and I will take that and absorb that in.
Date: 2/3/2014 4:20:00 PM
Feeling the emotion in this
Login to Reply
Gibbs Avatar
Jawaan Gibbs
Date: 2/3/2014 11:12:00 PM
Thank you sir very much!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter