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For ' pantoum purists,' my apologies for modifying the final stanza, somewhat 'out of the box,' in order to deliver the poem's message...

Cold the winter's sun, in haze enveloped Ice crystal's daggers atop the glistening snow Still his once-beating heart, portals shuttered Stopped his proud shoulders, in the face of the storm Ice crystal's daggers atop the glistening snow Trudged he onward, relentless, destiny unknown Stooped his proud shoulders, in the face of the storm Sought he a sign, an omen, so hope could grow Trudged he onward, relentless, destiny unknown Eye-tearing winds gathered around him Sought he a sign, an omen, so hope could grow As twilight drew closer, no let-up of snow What was this, in his path, a flower did bloom As night descended, his heart beat anew He inhaled of the flower, his face lit up, all aglow His shoulders again straight, hope did they show As night descended, his heart beat anew Ice crystal's daggers atop glistening snow His shoulders again straight, hope did they show Marched he onward, defiant, atop glistening snow

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Date: 9/24/2019 4:43:00 PM
Gershon this is truly a beautiful post! And a fav for me!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 7:23:00 PM
Wow. I thank you so much for the FAVE on this one, esp. since I modified that last stanza a bit. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 9/24/2019 3:52:00 PM
Your poetic words capture the intensity and urgency felt in this excellently written Pantoum poem, Gershon. Great write!! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 4:07:00 PM
Laura, this may seem crazy, but I was just thinking, 'Where has Laura Leiser been lately?'---and here is such an enthusiastic, encouraging comment. Thank you so much!! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 9/24/2019 3:40:00 PM
Wow Gershon! This is excellent. Perseverance and hope. Well written. A FAV for me :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/24/2019 4:06:00 PM
I'm always appreciative of and humbled by a FAV. Thank you so much, Heidi! Blessings, Gershon

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