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her sons first school day she then waves him off smiling ~ whilst holding back tears
Written 31st May 2019 Writing challenge 5, May 2019, senyru poetry contest Sponsored by Dear Heart

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Date: 6/29/2019 1:44:00 PM
Your thoughts tug at my heart. Letting go is very difficult, especially between mother and child. Congratulations Tom. This poem is climbing the Chart of Best Poems. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/29/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thank you very much Brandy, a very emotional time for moms letting go for the first time. Tom
Date: 6/23/2019 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations Tom! I can only imagine the bittersweet emotions that this day would bring. Beautifully expressed.
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Date: 6/24/2019 2:34:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, hope alls well, have emailed you. Tom
Date: 6/13/2019 3:25:00 AM
What a beautiful rendition of the so special and unique bond mother and child! You have captured the finest feelings with the finest of your words! A wonderful read, Tom! A great pleasure to read your poetry.. my deepest regards and blessings. A FAV.
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Date: 6/13/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Besma, I'm happy you liked it. I hope you are we'll. Tom.
Date: 6/10/2019 10:33:00 PM
Wow this made me remember how it was when my kids went off to school! More traumatic to the parent than the child at times I believe!;) oh I see congrats are in order!;)
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Date: 6/11/2019 4:53:00 AM
Thank you Brenda, for the kids it was a new adventure but sad for the moms letting go for the first time. Tom.
Date: 6/10/2019 3:42:00 PM
Back here with congratulations. Can't do much else here today. I am SO behind!!
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Date: 6/11/2019 4:51:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, sometimes we have those kind of days where there aren't enough hours. Tom
Date: 6/10/2019 2:27:00 PM
Ohhh, such a sweet Senyru Tom, brings back many memories too! Congrats on your win Tom, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 6/11/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann, definitely an emotional time for moms and even the children. Tom
Date: 6/10/2019 11:07:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu and I love the image too!
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Date: 6/10/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance and also for hosting the contest. Tom
Date: 6/10/2019 9:22:00 AM
Perfect. Well written Tom :)
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Date: 6/10/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, Tom
Date: 6/4/2019 3:52:00 PM
This write reminds me of myself when I took Ricky for his first day of school - but once i kissed him (for the first and last time) in front of his school mates to be, told him to make a friend - he did and they both proudly came to show each other off to their respective mums at hometime! Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/10/2019 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, sorry for late reply. Glad all was ok for him, I remember my first day, I wasn't impressed lol. Tom
Date: 6/3/2019 6:05:00 AM
What a tender historic moment inscribed in the soul of both mother and child ! Beautifully captured dearest, Tom! Excellently done!
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Date: 6/3/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. Tom
Date: 6/2/2019 7:59:00 AM
Many a mum been there... nice one Tom
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Date: 6/2/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thanks S.O., yes it's an emotional time for many moms. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 5:24:00 PM
Hello Tom, yes it would be hard to let go. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/2/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 4:23:00 PM
ohh, so true; the slight anxiety of separation... in kinder, i was the one who cried looking for mom... fabulous senryu, tom! my trip was great; how about you?... huggs
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Date: 6/2/2019 4:14:00 AM
Thanks nette, had a great time but it went to quick. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 4:07:00 PM
ah, poignant and true, for sure, Tom. Good luck in Dear Heart's contest.
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Date: 6/1/2019 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Caren, its an emotional time for moms to let go when their child starts school for the first time. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 1:46:00 PM
Poignant scene with a sweet picture!
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Date: 6/1/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea , loved yours with a strong message. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 12:32:00 PM
I bet there are lots of mothers who do this, Tom. (I think mine was glad to send me off to school. LOL) A very sweet and touching senryu. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 6/1/2019 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn, haha, I bet she missed you really. Tom
Date: 6/1/2019 7:20:00 AM
Hi Tm: I remember those days, Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/1/2019 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Ralph.
Date: 5/31/2019 11:49:00 PM
i remember it so well 43 years ago!
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Date: 6/1/2019 12:28:00 AM
Those memorable days stay with you forever.
Date: 5/31/2019 6:53:00 PM
Touching Tom
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Date: 5/31/2019 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Allen.
Date: 5/31/2019 3:35:00 PM
We both wrote about a mother and child, Tom! Quite an emotional moment! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/31/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Paul, young children and mothers always bring emotions to the surface especially when they're separated for the first time. Was only thinking today of my first day at school, I didn't enjoy it lol. Tom
Date: 5/31/2019 3:03:00 PM
- I remember that feeling ... lovely written, Tom - Best wishes in the contest :)
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Date: 5/31/2019 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Anne, a very emotional time for mothers letting their babies out of their sight for the first time. Tom
Date: 5/31/2019 8:10:00 AM
I'm running to my mom now to ask how she felt on my first day of school. Wohoooo ??
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Date: 5/31/2019 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Swetha, will she tell you or will she keep it a secret how she felt on the day. Tom
Date: 5/31/2019 7:00:00 AM
Your poem brought back memories of those first days for our kids..so well written, Tom. All the best.
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Date: 5/31/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, it can be an emotional time for moms, they have to put on a brave face. Tom.
Date: 5/31/2019 5:38:00 AM
A poem many can relate to Tom, beautifully penned:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2019 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Jan, hope your feeling better. Tom
Date: 5/31/2019 5:28:00 AM
Lovely, Tom.
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Date: 5/31/2019 5:39:00 AM
Thank You Line. Tom

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