So Far the Miles

At nightfall when tenderness wakes
somewhere between crumbs of feet,
when gulls dive to taste the bay
and foggy breeze flapping sweet.
My eyes stroll on plays of pine
where fireflies and moonbeams meet
to cherish scent of good night’s day
a purple bough spills hopeful treat

come now the rhythm of blue night
lay me down on feathers' bark
oh, rock the leaves for just one touch
so far the miles, bring wishes back

I feel my winds call him, dear one
on huffs upon my new bridal chest
while gales croon a longing tune
splendor of light, fill this request.
As tides of passages scan the flights
missing waltzes, I feign a rest
captive in remains of rewinds,
just one last sigh for war’s fierce test

come now the rhythm of blue night
lay me down on feathers’ bark
oh, rock the leaves for just one touch
so far the miles, bring wishes back

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: Kelly, my friend, your soldier will
come home soon

PD's Contest: Longing
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Passages" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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June 16, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Congrats on your great win Nette....enjoyed!
Johnson Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:37 PM
feel the wanting ever wanting, for the boy to come home now....
Christian Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:18 AM
aw bless that is lovley, it is sad when loved ones get sent miles away. and "thanks nette, my dad passed 23 hours after I had my son James who is 16 this year, on fathers day in 1993 I got baptised and gave my life to God, although i had some christian back ground it was awesome just to know God and not just know about him, to have a real on going relationship is cool, so it feels good to say i am only 19 years old hahaah in christian years. take care God bless from diane"
Wesley Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 10:36 PM
This is almost a lullaby Nette, it whispers to me and tells of imagery that could only be found in a dream. You did this sublimely and I wish you all the best inthe contest. Luv, Elizabeth
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June 9, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Just visit and wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 9, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Nette, i enjoyed the extra miles painted here.. it can bring one home all the way... take care..pd
Poet Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Hi Nette,another amazing write from you.Love the imagery.Best wishes.
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June 8, 2012 at 6:16 PM
YOU BLEW MY MIND WITH THIS GEM!!! GOOD JOB!!!
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 4:28 PM
This is so lovely Nette...you are a sweet friend for Kelly (and me) - oxox hugggs Anne-Lise
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Enjoyed reading this very expressive and descriptive work..I am glad that I chose it to read this eve..Sara
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Nette, I just love this, it flows wonderfully well, ....David
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