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So Far Away

My heart is broke because your so far away, my mind can't stop thinking about the day,that you will finally get to come home,and you will no longer have to feel so alone. All of your family is missing you so much, we are counting the days to again feel your touch. You have changed so much since to day you had to leave, we know that you will be ok as long as you believe. You are a good person and you have a big heart, just hold your head high and make a new start. You are smart and strong and can make your life good, it's time for you to be happy the way that you should. HAVE FAITH AND BELIEVE! You can be who you want to be. LOVE,MOM I wrote this for my daughter when she got into some trouble and had to spend a couple years away from us.Happy to say she is home and is now a mommy.And a very good one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/9/2014 10:14:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Many Miles Away theme, congrats on a fine win,colleen
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Date: 4/7/2014 8:01:00 PM
Beautifully written Collen and congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:56:00 PM
COLLEEN, Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/7/2014 9:34:00 AM
This poem touched my heart Colleen, Congrats on your win......Hugs......Roger
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Date: 6/23/2013 10:48:00 AM
These words not only reflect on the character of the daughter, but also on the mother.... Great words for a great win.... Jake
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:57:00 PM
Hi Colleen, . Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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Date: 11/19/2009 9:02:00 PM
Great advice in poem form. This is golden
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Date: 11/17/2009 3:07:00 PM
You should consider entering the "My Dear" contest in the member contest section on the left. You have a gift with words and I think you would do especially well in this particular contest. Check it out, it's free to enter! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 10/19/2009 3:02:00 PM
This is beautiful, very nice indeed. Kate. x
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