Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme Royal

So Different Was Her Groom You See

A promise was made with fingers crossed,
In front of God and family.
Bride did not relish being bossed,
Macho man came out on Day three.
So different was her groom, you see.
She jumped in her car, set speed to zoom,
Got as far as she could from this little goon.

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Michelle Faulkner September 27, 2018 at 6:45 PM Nifty little ditty, if I did not already know you wrote it I would think "So Caren-esque!" Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2018 at 7:28 PM That's the nicest thing to say, Michelle! So nice! Thank you my friend; I am flattered and pleased.

Rhona Mcferran September 27, 2018 at 11:41 AM Clever write! This is why I HATED dating. So many people are deceptive until they think they have you tied down... Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2018 at 1:50 PM But guess what? I had a maternal grandmother who divorced two before she got the right one, and this was in the 20's.

Jennifer Proxenos September 27, 2018 at 10:40 AM Hi Caren, Really enjoyed - doesn't pay to show too much testerone! LOL! xoxo Jennifer Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2018 at 10:53 AM It surely does not! I am from a matriarchal society.

M. L. Kiser September 27, 2018 at 5:53 AM I think I know that couple! well done. Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2018 at 6:41 AM I have met many women who should have done this but stayed trying to change the little goon.