Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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So Complicated

He's sandwiched between two women
                  aggressively pursuing him.
         He's done more than enough to prove
             to both they should have nothing
      to do with him, yet they keep coming back
      to him, but it is his problem or the women's?



Bite-Size Poem No.20 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Date written: 09/07/2021

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Edward,Oh I agree it is complicated. blessings my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2021 at 3:38 PM Hello Edward, it does sound complicated. Your welcome . blessings my friend. Edward Ibeh September 7, 2021 at 12:10 PM Thanks for the visit as always, Darlene:-)

L Milton Hankins September 7, 2021 at 9:23 AM Quite a story in these short lines, Edward. Well done. I sort of agree with Kim that they should all three move on! Best wishes for the contest. Edward Ibeh September 7, 2021 at 12:09 PM Thank you so much, Milt:-)

Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2021 at 6:48 AM All three need to get on with life! Well said! Love your bite-size poem. Edward Ibeh September 7, 2021 at 6:57 AM Thank you very much, Kim:-)