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So Close

So close I can taste it make it out of poverty one day I will be the greatest not overrated nor sedated learn to love no hatred put the drug down no need to be faded look at all the things around and know deep down they were like you when you were created life is like a mirror face it and if you lose something replace it the light at the end of the tunnel its so close I can taste it. -TA

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Date: 1/5/2019 10:18:00 AM
This is beautiful... I love it so much, also, sometimes, failure can be closer to success than we can every imagine it... So close, so close... Thank you
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Todd Aguilar Jr.
Date: 1/14/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate the feedback. More to come keep reading!

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