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So Blind

You watched me slip slowly away. I remember my feelings that very day Feeling my hand slip through yours Turning away, not letting you have a say. You watched me build that lonely wall I can remember standing so very small Feeling my heart turn so cold Turning away, I’d do nothing but fall. You watched me hide and withdraw I can remember closing that very door Feeling confusion build up inside Turning away, why would I want more? I watched you cry in my mind You remember my love being so kind Feeling lonely without you here Turning to you….I’ve been so blind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 11:40:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gareth. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:26:00 PM
Congrats Gareth on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all luv.. enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving ...
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:43:00 PM
This poem just oozes emotion and feeling Gareth >> wonderful piece >> James
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:23:00 AM
VERY sad. We are all blind when it comes to love...WE are also dumb, well at least I am .Enjoyed reading your poem today...
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Date: 2/22/2010 7:17:00 PM
An emotional romantic write Gareth and all who read can relate to your emphatic words.. enjoyed .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S. ..thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry also..
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Date: 2/22/2010 2:18:00 PM
writer's presence penned is haunting in this piece
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