Snowy Window

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albino ~VIEW~
Persian tailed jackrabbit
ebony awaits 

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January breeze
snowbird, whistles on tree top
where did x-mass go?

by;p.d.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dailey Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Odd but beautiful none the less. Mike
Haick Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, P.D. Merry Christmas and happy New Year! Always, Annalise
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Congrats!
May Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 5:36 AM
congrats on a great win PD
Gasun Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 5:26 AM
This is an extremely beautiful and wonderful haiku poem for Christmas my dearest sis-ie pooh and my greatest poet PD! I super love it/them and the fantastic images and feelings they bring until the season ends. My big warm congratulations on your awesome win! Advance merry, merry Christmas to you and your love ones! love always and forever, Leonora
Posey Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 5:07 AM
Great win, PD! Congratulations.... Love your hat..... Jake
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 4:04 AM
Congratulations on your big win pd my friend xx
Widjanarko Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:30 AM
Linda, Congrats for your winning :D they may short, but they left a big and deep impression on us :D - Hug, Yanny
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:10 AM
PD, BIG congrats to you on this win. I especially like that second one. Very haiku-ish for me!! I was very surprised by your blog. thanks for thinking so highly of me. and also for my win in your recent contest I hope you have talked with Tim? He is sure a sweet guy. Luv,Andrea
Arowolo Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:44 PM
Wonderful piece from a unique lady...Congrats on your superb win,PD..You are always CLASSIC...XOXO...
D. Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:11 PM
Nice :-) win, love you
A   Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:19 PM
thanks... xox...xox
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest P.D..... Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 3:01 PM
I really like yours, PD. I entered with poem having nothing to do with the moon or saki but didn't make the list. Wish I had understood this contest better. Anyway. bIG congrats to you . I"ve probably been back to this haiku set of yours a million times already!
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 12:42 AM
how creative you are, PD... congrats on your splendid win!..:) huggs!
May Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 3:08 PM
congrats on your win PD
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August 5, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Awesome haiku, PD! I love the imagery...congrats on your win in the haiku challenge contest! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Ramage Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:31 PM
You always have such an interesting twist to poems, I really enjoy your writing. Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Tex, congrats on your win, love it...think I missed this before..David
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 12:44 AM
PD. just wanted to say thanks for the contest win. I am feeling overwhelmed so that's why I am trying to avoid the blogs. Also, I just don't think I could keep up if Soup turned into chatting like at Facebook. I can't even keep up with poetry comments let alone chatting. but if I were always home and not working,I think I could grow quite addicted to such a feature. I'm going to be gone this weekend on a little trip. I hate thinking of all the time I'll lose here! andrea
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Remembering this duo of haiku. They are awesome, PD.
Horne Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:49 AM
beautiful haiku, PD. Hope you're having a great week
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Rereading these. I really like them. PD. I guess I confused you again. I ENTERED your contest. Was just letting you know that I was not able to include my name because of the length of the poem!! Thanks, sweetie. Luv, Andrea
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April 3, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Very good Haiku also Hun.... Pleaure to read and savor the sweet taste of what you offer...
Perritano Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:44 AM
this is good I love poetry that makes me put the time into considering all the options...peace
Pettit Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:58 PM
How imaginative to describe a winter window as an "albino". With a lack of skin pigmentation, snow would look like an albino. Good write.
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