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Snowy Mountain Scene

I am a snowy mountain painting scene I also have a cabin on the land People look to escape in beauty seen A painter made me with delicate hands I hang on the wall, in the cabin too I also have a cabin on the land I am bright near the window, sun shines through Look at me and visit this pretty place I hang on the wall in the cabin too I love to see the smiles on people’s face The evergreens around the lake bring peace Look at me and visit this pretty place The painter made me with feelings released You can see it in the colors I show The evergreens around the lake bring peace There is a history to me, I know I am a snowy mountain painting scene You can see it in the colors I show People look to escape in beauty seen 8/23/17 *Entry for Artwork Contest/Personification: Sponsor Lewis Raynes

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Roy Pett

Date: 8/24/2017 10:27:00 AM

Beautiful poem Heidi, creates wonderful images, GL in contest. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Roy. I am a painter and I have paintings like this, so it was fun to do. :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2017 6:12:00 PM

i like the serenity of the scenery you describe Heidi....Wonderful write...GL in the contest

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 6:27:00 PM

Hi Joseph. That is great to hear you feel serenity from the scenery described. Thank you very much ! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/23/2017 4:53:00 PM

Very beautiful poem, Heidi. Your phrasing is meter perfect. A gem of a poem. Love and peace.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Freddie! I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/23/2017 4:45:00 PM

Loved the snowy mountain painting.. good flow.. good luck for the contest!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 6:26:00 PM

That's great to hear you love this one Vijay! Thanks :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/23/2017 4:17:00 PM

This is lovely Heidi! I could almost visualize the peaceful scene you paint with your words. Best of luck in the contest. I can tell you spent some time on this beauty. : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 4:28:00 PM

I also just changed a line ...lol.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 4:25:00 PM

Hi Connie. That is great, you can visualize it. I appreciate your comment. Actually, it didn't take long this afternoon. Probably because I paint oil painting mountain scenes. Thank you. :)