Snowy Mountain Scene

I am a snowy mountain painting scene
I also have a cabin on the land
People look to escape in beauty seen

A painter made me with delicate hands
I hang on the wall, in the cabin too
I also have a cabin on the land

I am bright near the window, sun shines through
Look at me and visit this pretty place
I hang on the wall in the cabin too

I love to see the smiles on people’s face
The evergreens around the lake bring peace
Look at me and visit this pretty place

The painter made me with feelings released
You can see it in the colors I show
The evergreens around the lake bring peace

There is a history to me, I know
I am a snowy mountain painting scene
You can see it in the colors I show
People look to escape in beauty seen

8/23/17  

 *Entry for Artwork Contest/Personification:  Sponsor Lewis Raynes
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Pett Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Beautiful poem Heidi, creates wonderful images, GL in contest. :))
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Roy. I am a painter and I have paintings like this, so it was fun to do. :)
May Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:12 PM
i like the serenity of the scenery you describe Heidi....Wonderful write...GL in the contest
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Hi Joseph. That is great to hear you feel serenity from the scenery described. Thank you very much ! :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Very beautiful poem, Heidi. Your phrasing is meter perfect. A gem of a poem. Love and peace.
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thank you Freddie! I appreciate your comment :)
Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Loved the snowy mountain painting.. good flow.. good luck for the contest!
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 6:26 PM
That's great to hear you love this one Vijay! Thanks :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:17 PM
This is lovely Heidi! I could almost visualize the peaceful scene you paint with your words. Best of luck in the contest. I can tell you spent some time on this beauty. : )
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:28 PM
I also just changed a line ...lol.
Sands Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Hi Connie. That is great, you can visualize it. I appreciate your comment. Actually, it didn't take long this afternoon. Probably because I paint oil painting mountain scenes. Thank you. :)
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