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Snowstorm Haiku

searching through snowdrifts

                           lone sparrow flashes over

                                                     thoughts of survival

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Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2010 at 2:17 PM

Hey, this is quite good too. I see you have posted several haiku recently. I love haiku and am set now on reading all of them! Luv, Andrea

Fabiyas M V

December 20, 2010 at 8:05 PM

Very sweet scene,friend.Your image brings to mind a lot of thoughts.

Constance La France

December 20, 2010 at 6:00 PM

So "vivid" I think it is "magical"~~

Deb Radke

December 20, 2010 at 3:51 PM

Oh very good. This is exactly what it must be like for birds in the north. I especially like the placement of your lines. It feels like a bird flying, having to into the snowbanks to search for food. Very good haiku.