Snow's Slight

After a downpour a cheerful rainbow After a snowfall nary a snow-bow Snow's slight ~ Nature's oversight

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/17/2021 9:26:00 AM

Gershon, That slight made me think. But then again, no. The 'physics are all wrong' rationale kicks in. A shame, where is Caren's Trixie when we need her? -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2021 4:59:00 PM

I think Trixie is investigating where 'snow-bow' is a 'fake word' coined by the 'fake news media.' lol. Actually if you look at Caren's comment just below yours, you'll see what Trixie's up to. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/16/2021 7:06:00 PM

I want to borrow “snow bow” I think it is a marvelous new word. I want it added to the dictionary.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2021 4:58:00 PM

You don't have to borrow 'snow-bow.' It is yours to have and to hold, in rain -- oops -- scratch rain -- in snow! Thanks, Caren. :) gw

J. Summers

Date: 1/16/2021 6:23:00 PM

I like this Gershon. Clever ending.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2021 4:51:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, J. In this new year, I'm trying to be 'clever as ever.' Hope I make it to year's end. If I end up turning green, then I'll be a clever evergreen. lol. Cheers, Gershon