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Snowmen

Six snowmen were cherished by Jill.
Eight snowmen she wanted to kill,
so six snowmen live on
while eight snowmen are gone.
Those snowmen she rolled off a hill!

Jan. 7, 2019 for charles messina's Same Word Winter Limerick Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper

January 18, 2019 at 10:23 PM

Andrea, fantastic ,very well written Limerick with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y.

January 15, 2019 at 6:31 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm just back to congratulations on your 1st place win. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis

Joseph May

January 15, 2019 at 4:48 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!..

Tania Kitchin

January 15, 2019 at 4:34 AM

Coming back to congratulate you on your winning placement with your funny limerick!

Charles Messina

January 14, 2019 at 10:29 PM

I love this one, Andrea. Made me laugh...very creative and fun to read. Congratulations on your 1st place win! :) Charlie

Vladislav Raven

January 11, 2019 at 8:19 PM

Hi Andrea, it seems everyone has went limerick mad, and why not, they are all so good. Love the fun. I am glad I ended with a laugh this early morning. I hope this one does well for you in the contest. It reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2019 at 12:46 PM

Very funny, Andrea! It should do very well in Charlie's contest. Awesome punch line. Hugs, carolyn

Alexis Y.

January 9, 2019 at 5:03 PM

Lol! Andrea, You've penned a good one the contest. You met the challenge hands down. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

John Lawless

January 9, 2019 at 8:18 AM

She built a snow man with yellow snow.... A snow man that really had to go.... for snow men that leak..... are snow men that streak..... and they write snow man names in the snow

Janice Canerdy

January 8, 2019 at 11:35 PM

Good one, Andrea! Janice

Joseph May

January 8, 2019 at 10:13 PM

Lol..Nicely penned Andrea..best wishes

Michelle Faulkner

January 8, 2019 at 2:03 PM

Sounds like a snow army!

M. L. Kiser

January 8, 2019 at 6:55 AM

Oh my, I hope this massacre didn't involve any snow daddies! Seriously, a great fun limerick.

Tania Kitchin

January 8, 2019 at 4:24 AM

Ha ha, very clever, loved the last line!

Tom Cunningham

January 8, 2019 at 3:06 AM

A cool entry Andrea, good luck. Tom.

Susan Ashley

January 7, 2019 at 10:06 PM

Lol! It seems like ole Jill is a pill :) A fun and fantastic limerick, Andrea. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger

January 7, 2019 at 8:30 PM

Hilariously written by a poetess-murderess! Wow! Nice! And chilling.

Rico Leffanta

January 7, 2019 at 6:25 PM

Chilly, chilly, chilly! You need more chill in your life! Aloha! Rico

Robert L. Hinshaw

January 7, 2019 at 5:43 PM

I see another top winner here, Andrea - very creative and witty - good luck! So the secret is out about good ol' SOS! i love the stuff and Vera used to make it quite often. Since she is gone, I looked up a recipe on the 'puter and have become quite adept at making the stuff for myself now! Best always - Bob