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Night's descent with heaven's catharsis Of white cold's drug for the dark; Even whirls of flaking bits loveliness— Winter's fresh, ice only shower. Of white cold's drug for the dark— Just right for the meek moon's glow, Winter's fresh, ice only shower On sleeping hyacinths underground. Just right for the meek moon's glow, Even whirls of flaking bits loveliness On sleeping hyacinths underground— Night's descent with heaven's catharsis.

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Date: 1/22/2024 7:00:00 AM
Paige, once more, your poetic expression and skillful command of language are admirable.
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Date: 1/21/2024 7:28:00 PM
Love this, Paige!
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Date: 1/17/2024 12:04:00 PM
Another well written pantoum dear Paige.. great verse and use of language..
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Date: 1/17/2024 9:48:00 AM
Wow, dear beautiful Paige, you always mesmerise me with your moonlit wordplay and such intricate imageries that you weave so impeccably with your vivid artistic skills.. This pantoum flows beautifully and incorporates my FAV moon in a gorgeous way, as always. Your words have created a myriad poetic depth in my mind with "On sleeping hyacinths underground", "Even whirls of flaking bits loveliness—", "Just right for the meek moon's glow" Brilliant! Sending you light & love ~ a FAV this is..
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Date: 1/17/2024 6:54:00 AM
Ah dear poetic soul, your words truly left me in awe so dreamy and descriptive with exquisite metaphors and thoughts articulated in such a poetic manner, i especially loved “ Just right for the meek moon's glow, Even whirls of flaking bits loveliness On sleeping hyacinths underground” so good! And a poem with moon is always a fave for me! Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always
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Date: 1/16/2024 8:49:00 PM
What wonderful imagery, Paige - the sleeping bulb under the magic of snow. This is so engaging like finding a sleeping beauty! Enjoyed very much! Blessings for 2024,
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