Snowflakes On Burnt Skin

Moonlit children & carved smiles
Making every step seem worthwhile
Running away with the stars
Dancing in the wind, not so far

Decaying lungs & broken dreams
A bleeding mouth, drowning screams
Black veins & pale skin
addiction help deep within

Raindrops on lacerated lips
Hidden behind the lunar eclipse
Silver tongue & crippled wings
A spectral thorn & razor blade sings

Toxic showers, its poisons kiss
Suffocated by fake happiness
Plastic lungs & taped confession
Tempted by disguised aggression

Interrupted & separated skies
Peaking through sugar coated lies
Black curtains & paper hearts
Last words spoken before falling apart

Artfully twisting these words into gold
Cries muted & pain that's never old
Breaking free from any sin
Lies snowflakes on burnt skin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/3/2012 3:12:00 AM
this is really beautiful. good rhyming and flow.
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:27:00 PM
CANDICE, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Candice. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 11:56:00 AM
Powerful write here, Candice ... been awhile since you've posted here at the Soup and I look forward to reading lots more of your writing!
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Date: 8/8/2009 11:04:00 PM
Beautifull written... enjoy your night.
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Date: 8/2/2009 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Candice. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem, and being a winner in Michael's contest!! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Michael's contest! Truely a wonderful poem! ~*~ Trudy~*~
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Date: 7/21/2009 9:38:00 AM
Wow this is beyond words description, i love it.... Sabrina
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Date: 7/20/2009 3:25:00 PM
INTRIGUE!
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:06:00 AM
Superb poem Candice, well written>>James
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Date: 6/30/2009 4:15:00 AM
Wow a very deep thought provoking write Candice. Outstanding. Love and blessings, Carol
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