Snowflakes Call My Name

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I have an affinity to snowflakes falling, for I was born in a snow blizzard storm; and in winter it is my name- snow is calling, so, I walk forest paths dressed cozy warm. For I was born in a snow blizzard storm, I love when fragile snowflakes kiss my cheeks; so, I walk forest paths dressed cozy warm, to stand in thought beside still trickling creeks. I love when fragile snowflakes kiss my cheeks, my hair snow draped white like the forest trees; to stand in thought beside still trickling creeks, I am not bothered by the iced cold breeze. My hair snow draped white like the forest trees, I wander seeking a cure for my scarred soul; to stand in thought beside still trickling creeks, for even my loved snow will never make me whole. I wander seeking a cure for my scarred soul, and in winter it is my name- snow is calling; for even my loved snow will never make me whole, I have an affinity to snowflakes falling. _______________________________ November 22, 2020 Poetry/Pantoum/Snowflakes Call My Name Copyright Protected, ID 11-1306-650-22 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Pen a Pantoum sponsor, D.W. Rodgers, Judged, 12/27/20 Honorable Mention Submitted to the Premier contest, Completely Your Choice (45) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/19/2021 Second Place

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Date: 1/20/2021 8:14:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on this win. I can see why it won. It is beautiful. Snow is magical like this write. Stay warm with your win and have a blessed day...................
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Date: 1/20/2021 9:56:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/28/2020 7:56:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/28/2020 9:22:00 AM
Alexis, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate a lot _Constance
Date: 12/27/2020 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/28/2020 9:22:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the congratulations, appreciate _Constance
Date: 12/27/2020 1:55:00 PM
Hi Constance, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave
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Date: 12/27/2020 2:09:00 PM
Dave, thanks so much for the pantoum contest and for my place on your winning list, appreciate very much _Constance
Date: 12/27/2020 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I can feel the snow from your wonderful write and picture. Enjoy your win today with joy/blessings........................
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Date: 12/27/2020 11:41:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, it is snowing now in Ottawa, Canada _Constance
Date: 11/23/2020 7:24:00 AM
You are brilliant at hte pantoum, a form some struggle with.. yours flow really well and it has some great lines..
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Date: 11/23/2020 4:15:00 PM
Silent, thanks for visiting and for the compliment, it is a very difficult form to have make sense so I am happy that I accomplished that _Constance
Date: 11/23/2020 3:51:00 AM
Reading and writing Pantoum is fun. This is too good Constance ~ Ani
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Date: 11/23/2020 4:16:00 PM
Ani, thanks for visiting and the compliment, I find writing pantoums fun also, it is like putting a puzzle together _Constance
Date: 11/22/2020 5:02:00 PM
Love this!
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Date: 11/23/2020 4:16:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the love _Constance
Date: 11/22/2020 6:32:00 AM
This is SO beautiful... snowflakes are truly a inspiration and soothe the spirit with breaths of joy. Your poem is AMAZING. I love it and am sure it's a top winner! God bless you dear Constance
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Date: 11/23/2020 4:16:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the comment, compliment and love _Constance
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