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Snowflakes

Precipitation crystalline Water ice, snow defined From the clouds It drifts slowly down To whiten natures Awesome grounds Light coverings Drifts so high Natures magic From her heavenly skies No two flakes, are at all the same An amazing claim in natures vein Even twins have a difference in them But snowflakes are the pure ice gem Supercooled droplets Rain down on us Glee-full children stop their fuss Mummy, daddy let us play Remember you too were kids, they say Picture postcard Christmas card wish The delight of a snowfall One of natures bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 11:00:00 AM
Very good descrition of the snow and fun with family. We don't have very much snow here but when we do it is a beautiful sight but since we are not prepared it brings many problems. Excellent write. Sara
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Date: 6/14/2009 4:25:00 PM
Very cool write James and yes, we do seem to share some of the same themes don't we? I see the magic of snowflakes in both our poems. Melody?
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Date: 6/8/2009 3:33:00 PM
You paint a very vivid picture. Well written and well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:43:00 AM
I am a winter girl and absolutely love the snow. What an enchanting, beautiful write! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/7/2009 10:13:00 AM
beautiful and chilling! :)) nice work, Stephanie
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Date: 6/7/2009 10:01:00 AM
yes James, a snowfall is heavenly! well done! James
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:53:00 AM
Well Highlander you make miss snow and want to see it so much now thank you again dear
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:46:00 AM
Snow is so "magical," James! You capture its beauty well in this awesome poem. We don't get snow where I live, but I bet you see a lot of it in the Highlands. Just imagining the beauty of your mountains covered with snow fills me with serenity. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:37:00 AM
Dear James: So very descriptive, and very beautifully written! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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