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Snowflakes

Snowflakes falling gently Like a brides veil touching her face A path now covered in snow Like a trail of white covering the steps leading up to the Aisle. The wind howls a tune through the trees Like a church choir playing the wedding march The union of water crystals in air forming snowflakes Exchanging of vows, the bride and groom now take. The snow now bound together like an endless white carpet A couple starting out, on a bed of snow Love keeping them warm with a radiant glow. The snow now melting slowly to add To rivers of life that flow A magical wonderland, When the evening lights catches the snow. Dated 28.09.2020

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Date: 10/31/2020 7:30:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! AND A FAV FOR ME, DEAR CAROL.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 10/31/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Elaine....much appreciated.
Date: 9/28/2020 8:42:00 PM
I love the interweaving of the snow with the wedding. Beautiful, rich tapestry. Kudos, Gershon
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/28/2020 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Gershon.....much appreciated.
Date: 9/28/2020 4:22:00 AM
Carol beautiful poem!! very nice comparison of a natural event with life!! Congrats on your top win!!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/28/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thanks Krish....much appreciated.
Date: 9/28/2020 12:48:00 AM
Carol, I like how you bring out the attributes of snow as metaphors for the married couple and the life ahead of them. Nicely done, and congrats on your first place finish ~ John
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/28/2020 12:52:00 AM
Thanks John... much appreciated.