Snowflake Fantasies

I saw her do a little snowflake pirouette 
before a snowflake down of falling wet  
her snowflake glitter shone  
as my snowflake heart beat on 
a snowflake origami shimmering, aiguillette

January 6, 2019
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Faulkner Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Wishing a belated congratulations on your placement, this is so pristine!
Roper Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Pixie, great ,very well written Limerick with great imagery. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Messina Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:59 AM
I also loved this one, Pixie. The last line was excellent, well done! Congratulations on your win. :) Charlie
Y. Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Hi Pixie Dust, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
May Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on your win PD..
Bavington  Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 9:02 PM
This is nice. Kind of reminds me of the dance of the surgarplum fairies. Beautiful, graceful, and ageless. Happy New Year.
Faulkner Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Makes me think of little girls in ballet class, so pure and graceful-
Godwin Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 3:39 PM
How enchantingly creative! All the best ... CayCay
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Words of jewel adorn snowflake fantasies..well done, Pixie.
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