Snowflake


A crystal lattice so Devine
Slowly falling on earth supine
Surely we now must redefine
Our place in nature so sublime

Such elegant beauty a shrine
A crystal lattice so Devine
Each delicate flake is a sign
Slivers of heaven gods design

Ephemeral glory is thine
Fragile resplendence so benign
A crystal lattice so Devine
Fleeting splendour to death consign

Complex simplicity combine
Enchantment one cannot decline
Nor Michelangelo refine
A crystal lattice so Devine 


Dedicated to my friend Mary Jo who so loves the snow.
Written 04/05/2015



Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 4, 2015 at 11:24 PM
This is a wonderful dedication, Shane, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Cooper Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Thankyou, I enjoyed writing this piece, Mary Jo is a wonderful lass and truly does love the snow. love Shane xxx
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May 6, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile.
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May 21, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Thank you for your kind words Emile, Mary Jo was the inspiration for this piece. She is a constant source of inspiration. Love Shane
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May 6, 2015 at 4:22 AM
- Shane, this is really beautifully written - Mary Jo became happy - there is a great happiness in life .... the fact that you bring pleasures to a friend, it is a great gift - I wish you lovely day (and welcome to my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cooper Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 4:34 AM
Hello dear Anne-Lise friends are the only reason that life on this prison is bearable. Thank you for reading my work. I think of you as one of those who make me want to stay, a true friend. Stay safe Love Shane
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May 4, 2015 at 8:40 PM
G'day Shane... a lovely tribute to Mary Jo. Like us humans, every snowflake is different - Thanks Shane - Lindsay
Cooper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Hi Matey, So true no two alike, and that is what makes life worth living. The infinite possibility of always experiancing something new. And Mary Jo i think is one wonderfully unique lady, who happens to love the snow. take care my friend, Ciao Shane
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May 4, 2015 at 8:06 AM
It's beautiful, Shane....soft and light...and ethereal....like a snowflake. Such a lovely poem for Mary Jo. Lovely dedication. :) So glad when I see you post. Hugs...
Cooper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Dear little Dolphin, Thank you for your kind words, I am happy that you like the poem. Stay safe my friend, thankyou for stopping in. love Shane xxx
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May 4, 2015 at 5:43 AM
I am sure Mary Jo will love this Shane - So so beautifully penned with the repeated lines - 7 and faves:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cooper Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 5:54 AM
You really are so sweet to always be first to comment on my poems, I hope all is well with you and yours, I miss chatting. I thank you for putting this in your favs, I have spent a lot of time writing poems that I do not not post for one reason or another but I had set myself the task of writing a Quatern a while ago And now I have combined it with a Momorhyme. I truely appreciate your interest in my poems. Miss you. Love Shane xxx
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