Snowflake

A crystal lattice so Devine Slowly falling on earth supine Surely we now must redefine Our place in nature so sublime Such elegant beauty a shrine A crystal lattice so Devine Each delicate flake is a sign Slivers of heaven gods design Ephemeral glory is thine Fragile resplendence so benign A crystal lattice so Devine Fleeting splendour to death consign Complex simplicity combine Enchantment one cannot decline Nor Michelangelo refine A crystal lattice so Devine Dedicated to my friend Mary Jo who so loves the snow. Written 04/05/2015

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Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 11:24:00 PM

This is a wonderful dedication, Shane, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/5/2015 5:41:00 PM

Thankyou, I enjoyed writing this piece, Mary Jo is a wonderful lass and truly does love the snow. love Shane xxx

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/6/2015 9:39:00 AM

Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile.

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/21/2015 7:29:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Emile, Mary Jo was the inspiration for this piece. She is a constant source of inspiration. Love Shane

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/6/2015 4:22:00 AM

- Shane, this is really beautifully written - Mary Jo became happy - there is a great happiness in life .... the fact that you bring pleasures to a friend, it is a great gift - I wish you lovely day (and welcome to my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/6/2015 4:34:00 AM

Hello dear Anne-Lise friends are the only reason that life on this prison is bearable. Thank you for reading my work. I think of you as one of those who make me want to stay, a true friend. Stay safe Love Shane

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/4/2015 8:40:00 PM

G'day Shane... a lovely tribute to Mary Jo. Like us humans, every snowflake is different - Thanks Shane - Lindsay

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/4/2015 8:58:00 PM

Hi Matey, So true no two alike, and that is what makes life worth living. The infinite possibility of always experiancing something new. And Mary Jo i think is one wonderfully unique lady, who happens to love the snow. take care my friend, Ciao Shane

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2015 8:06:00 AM

It's beautiful, Shane....soft and light...and ethereal....like a snowflake. Such a lovely poem for Mary Jo. Lovely dedication. :) So glad when I see you post. Hugs...

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/4/2015 9:00:00 AM

Dear little Dolphin, Thank you for your kind words, I am happy that you like the poem. Stay safe my friend, thankyou for stopping in. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 5:43:00 AM

I am sure Mary Jo will love this Shane - So so beautifully penned with the repeated lines - 7 and faves:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/4/2015 5:54:00 AM

You really are so sweet to always be first to comment on my poems, I hope all is well with you and yours, I miss chatting. I thank you for putting this in your favs, I have spent a lot of time writing poems that I do not not post for one reason or another but I had set myself the task of writing a Quatern a while ago And now I have combined it with a Momorhyme. I truely appreciate your interest in my poems. Miss you. Love Shane xxx