Snowflake

Winter storms dropped a tiny snowflake on a towering mountain top.
'Tis bright and unique among the myriad of snowflakes that did drop.
This rhyme tells of the mighty contribution that tiny flake makes,
As it begins its odyssey to grace our rivers, ponds and lakes.

It reposes deep within the drifts and gleaming mounds of snow,
And briefly provides winter sport for folks with faces all aglow.
But soon the warmth of spring rouses it from its hibernation,
To begin its journey, meandering to its ultimate destination!

It thaws and with others of its ilk begins to form a tiny rill,
Slowly flowing among the scree and pines down a sloping hill.
The rill becomes a pristine stream carrying the flake along,
Rippling smoothly o'er ancient stones, producing a soothing song!

The stream joins a rushing river, wending its way to the sea.
The one-time snowflake providing succor for land and stately tree.
At last it reaches the ocean, spewing from the river's throat.
'Tis incredible! This once tiny flake helps keep mighty fleets afloat!

At times we may think we're insignificant, contributing nothing at all,
But each of us is unique and can help, no matter how great or small.
Each in their own way can accomplish mighty deeds if only they believe,
Ever keeping in mind that tiny snowflake and what it did achieve!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)

Placed No. 2 inConstance's "Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes" Contest
October 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/5/2010 9:41:00 AM
Yes, from snowflake to river to ocena. It's all in how we look at it, Robert. Awesome win! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:01:00 AM
Nice inspiring poem, congrats on the second place.
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:37:00 PM
wonderful poem, congrats on your win in the contest Bob
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:25:00 AM
Congrats, Sarge. Awesome. Enjoyed. Well deserved win. Ralphie
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:50:00 AM
There are a few wonderful writers on this site whom I have commented on, and your certainly one of them Robert. Many congratulations on your win with this delightful poetry >> James
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your big win in Constance's contest with another unique and creative write my friend .. rewarded by a top spot win luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 2:54:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this one earlier, Bob, but I'm so glad to see it placing second in the contest. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:49:00 PM
Wonderful work Robert. Shows what man could do if he was willing to immerse himself into the group for the betterment of humanity. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Bob
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:30:00 PM
A wonderful message in this poem....each one is significant....each of us, and each snowflake...I love the theme of this one! Congratulations on your win! _ love, Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations Bob on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:48:00 PM
Robert, This is a magnificent work of art filled with wisdom and grace. I love it and will keep it in my favorites! Blessings, Connie
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