Snowfall

Pure white of snowfall,

               Glistening tranquil mountains,

                     Evoke peace and love!








Written on 8/8/14
Contest-Any poem under five lines #1
Sponsor- PD A

Ranked 4th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/30/2014 7:27:00 AM
I love the divine tone in your haiku! Congrats Dr. Upma! ^_^
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Date: 8/27/2014 6:13:00 PM
Lovely description of snow covered mountains and the sense of peace it evokes. Well done, Upma, and congratulations on your win. // paul
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Date: 8/27/2014 6:03:00 PM
Congrats for your win, dear.
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Date: 8/27/2014 5:36:00 AM
Peaceful one with images, Dr. Upma. congrats
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Date: 8/27/2014 5:32:00 AM
Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2014 4:55:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2014 9:46:00 PM
Dr Upma :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 8/15/2014 9:02:00 AM
Dr. Upma Short but full of sweetness, serenity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my Super Powers poem.
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Date: 8/9/2014 8:50:00 PM
yes, they certainly do! Good luck in the contest. I am getting so confused about her recent contests and if and when the winners are posted!
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:53:00 AM
love the poem and the feeling it emits in so few words...
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Date: 8/9/2014 6:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit with congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:19:00 PM
Dear Dr. Upma, I could feel the serenity of the snow-covered mountains in your beautiful haiku. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:51:00 PM
tenderly scribed and so well marked, dr uma.. winter has its lovely moments.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:42:00 AM
I love it sweetie... Nothing finer than a fresh blanket ....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful Haiki! I love the snow it is such a spectacular show! great poem, best of luck in PD's contest :) :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 5:56:00 AM
simply stunning! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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