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Snowfall

Pure white of snowfall, Glistening tranquil mountains, Evoke peace and love! Written on 8/8/14 Contest-Any poem under five lines #1 Sponsor- PD A Ranked 4th

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2014 7:27:00 AM

I love the divine tone in your haiku! Congrats Dr. Upma! ^_^

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2014 6:13:00 PM

Lovely description of snow covered mountains and the sense of peace it evokes. Well done, Upma, and congratulations on your win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:03:00 PM

Congrats for your win, dear.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:36:00 AM

Peaceful one with images, Dr. Upma. congrats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2014 5:32:00 AM

Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 4:55:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:46:00 PM

Dr Upma :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Robin Davis

Date: 8/15/2014 9:02:00 AM

Dr. Upma Short but full of sweetness, serenity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my Super Powers poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2014 8:50:00 PM

yes, they certainly do! Good luck in the contest. I am getting so confused about her recent contests and if and when the winners are posted!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/9/2014 10:53:00 AM

love the poem and the feeling it emits in so few words...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2014 6:15:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work today..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit with congrats...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2014 10:19:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, I could feel the serenity of the snow-covered mountains in your beautiful haiku. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 1:51:00 PM

tenderly scribed and so well marked, dr uma.. winter has its lovely moments.. huggs

Tim Smith

Date: 8/8/2014 8:42:00 AM

I love it sweetie... Nothing finer than a fresh blanket ....hugs Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/8/2014 7:23:00 AM

Beautiful Haiki! I love the snow it is such a spectacular show! great poem, best of luck in PD's contest :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 5:56:00 AM

simply stunning! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx