Snowed In

As I’m snowed in cooking on the woodstove,
I’m doing the dishes, watching through my window
Heavy snow falling and swirling all around
It is mesmerizing to watch, calming in sight
Even as it piles up, there is comfort all around
The beauty is as far as I can see
A woodpecker visits the seed outside the window
Thoughts sift from my mind, like the snowflakes in the air
It is pristine, white, blanketed, everywhere!

Heidi Sands

11/27/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 1, 2018 at 8:19 PM
I cannot explain it, but the woodpecker you created just brought this write so vividly to life for me. Can just feel the freshness of the snow and the crisp, frosty air. Kudos! ~ gw
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December 2, 2018 at 7:44 AM
That is great to hear gw. The woodpecker do come to the birdseed right outside that window. Thank you for your kind feedback on this :)
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 2:42 PM
What lovely imagery Heidi. :)
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December 1, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Thank you Gary :)
Michael Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:46 AM
This sounds real...natural...I like the vibes...cool and calm...All the best Heidi
Sands Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 7:19 AM
That's nice to hear. (and it was exactly as it happened ) Thank you Arturo! Have a nice day :)
May Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Nice imagery Heidi..best wishes
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
Doll Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:51 PM
So beautiful and well expressed, Heidi. I enjoyed reading it very much, A Fav for me. Warm wishes~ Warren
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November 28, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Thank you Warren. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it and consider it a fav. :) Have a nice evening !
Onclaud Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:46 PM
ohh, you see the wonder and beauty of frost in the routine of life... how charming, heidi... huggs
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Yes, it was beautiful Nette. Thank you for your kind comment :)
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November 28, 2018 at 5:30 AM
A panorama of activities presented in 3D dearest, Heidi! Loved it!
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Thank you Demetrios. I am happy you loved it :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:31 AM
What a beautiful picture you have created in my mind Heidi, I can just see it. Tom.
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Tom :)
Kiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Excellently penned; had to "fav".
Sands Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you M.L. I appreciate your comment and the fav :)
Pandit Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Reads like I have a front row seat to your views..a serene imagery of nature's paintings..well written, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thank you Vijay. I felt like I just had to mention what I saw through the window. ...the snow was certainly beautiful the way it was coming down today :)
May Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:02 PM
That poem made me cold Heidi I had to turn up the heat in my house, I felt that I was there freezing. Very vivid poem!
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Oh. lol. I think I have plenty around here already. But I remember you mentioning their noise becoming bothersome. At least they aren't hammering directly on your house!
May Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:18 PM
I will ship all my woodpeckers to you Heidi for free, lol
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Wow Bobby. I am sorry to hear it made you cold lol. I wish the mention of woodstove helped. :) It is actually very Hot inside now, due to 2 woodstove's going lol.
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November 27, 2018 at 2:58 PM
A beautiful serenity you have gifted with the seasonal write Heidi, Just lovely! Happy Tuesday xxoo
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Thank you very much Mike ! Happy Tuesday :)
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November 27, 2018 at 2:53 PM
What a lovely memory you share with us, Heidi! How I wish I could have been there with you to see the snow piling up while you were enjoying watching it fall. This is sooo lovely! Hugs, Carolyn
Sands Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Thank you Carolyn. I also wish you could have seen it :)
Green Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 1:42 PM
I'll bet it is beautiful. Nicely done Heidi, you have painted an amazing picture with your words.
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November 27, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Chris. Yes, it is so beautiful today! :)
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