Snowdrops' Glow

Each reel of snowflake leaves behind,
fine traces of her glowing days,
a melancholy cast of mind,
while color sets the world ablaze.

Where flies a gold and opal whirl,
as the moon's lulling course disbands,
and chilly winds of winter swirl,
the hardened heart against it stands.

And yet this night contrives to hold
a promise, tinged with freshening air.
As droplets wing the crisping cold,
a glinting gem lies hidden there.

For with this frosty change, at last,
a love remains in snowdrop's glow,
whose mist will counter tattered past,
to flutter down like feathered snow.


Snow Contest
For Shadow Hamilton
11/20/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 6:16 AM
"...to flutter down like feathered snow." love this line of gem.
Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 5:18 PM
A lovely descriptive write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 10:02 PM
thanks, everyone.. winter is usually a bleak season and i needed to feel, see, touch the beauty of what it can bring to me... huggs
Bateman Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Hello Nette!! A truly beautiful poem in every respect. Congratulation of POTD!! And on your win in the contest. Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Godwin Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:31 AM
Original and lovely, each stanza is quite poetic, but the 3rd especially captivates me - how I love the feel the words gave me! CayCay
Godwin Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Oh, I see this gem won! Congratulations ... CayCay
Nunez Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:33 PM
So beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your awesome win and POTD. Will always appreciate your poetry. huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 2:18 PM
This is lovely Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day, Nette, beautiful poem and congratulations on your "Snow Contest" win.
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 1:18 PM
- Congrats on your p.o.t.d., Nette !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Congrats for being the POTD :) lovely read...
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 11:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats again for POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 10:26 AM
I have never seen 'real' falling snow...you have here shown its beauty. Can feel the aura of hope that surrounds these inspiring lines. Congrats on POTD...very merited! Hugs // paul
Mccutcheon Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Nettie, I had the feeling I should came here today, via the e-mail I received for Poem of the Day. I am so glad I did. What a beautifully, well written picturesque write. It is a winner in my book. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent. Love, Charlene
Konos Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day....love it...
Beaufort Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 7:35 AM
A poem of hope. May the flakes bring only good things for the future, and help us deal with the shocks from yesterday!
Nance Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Congrats on Poem of the Day Nette! :-)
Kayode Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 5:49 AM
I am really happy to see this as the POTD nette, congrats my friend...hugs.
Adewuyi Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 5:30 AM
Great Work!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 5:15 AM
Nette, lovely words, always grace and beautiful!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Lane Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:52 AM
Such a lovely poem, nette. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:42 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:55 PM
How lovely nette.. congrats on awesome first place win!
Deschler Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Your pen captures everything that is enchanting about falling snow in this captivating quatrain... An excellent poem, Nette :)
A  Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT
Anish Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 2:02 PM
The last line has nice alliteration. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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