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Snowbird Variations

SNOWBIRD VARIATIONS chirping merrily black midst an awful whiteness fat snowbirds seeding once in a while a twiggy branch comes alive snowbird fluffing lazy winter’s watch overcoming tedium suddenly – snowbirds a beautiful frost flaming red against the snow winter cardinal the frost coated limbs winter’s cold magical scene blackbirds brush the sky

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:05:00 PM

Daver,... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 4/30/2013 10:55:00 AM

Daver, a poem is a wonderful to capture snowbirds, you say it so well. You wouldn't believe the number of times I have chased cardinals trying to get their picture, lol. Enjoyed this.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/8/2013 10:45:00 PM

Beautiful session of birdwatching.. great pictures you have painted

... Gigno

Date: 2/11/2013 12:36:00 PM

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/25/2013 7:38:00 PM

You create beautiful word pictures here Daver.."

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/15/2013 11:11:00 AM

Love this write, Daver! A panoramic view of these wonderful creatures.:) Great imagery..."flaming red against the snow" oh, the magestic cardinal! Keep well Daver! Love, Mikki

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/14/2013 5:02:00 AM

I am glad I flew over to read this flock of haiku birdies. Well done Daver

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2013 10:48:00 AM

Daver wow great set of haiku's...David