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Snowbird Variations

SNOWBIRD VARIATIONS

chirping merrily
black midst an awful whiteness
fat snowbirds seeding 

once in a while
a twiggy branch comes alive
snowbird fluffing

lazy winter’s watch
overcoming tedium
suddenly – snowbirds	

a beautiful frost
flaming red against the snow
winter cardinal

the frost coated limbs
winter’s cold magical scene
blackbirds brush the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2014 6:05:00 PM
Daver,... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 4/30/2013 10:55:00 AM
Daver, a poem is a wonderful to capture snowbirds, you say it so well. You wouldn't believe the number of times I have chased cardinals trying to get their picture, lol. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 4/8/2013 10:45:00 PM
Beautiful session of birdwatching.. great pictures you have painted
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:36:00 PM
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Date: 1/25/2013 7:38:00 PM
You create beautiful word pictures here Daver.."
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Date: 1/15/2013 11:11:00 AM
Love this write, Daver! A panoramic view of these wonderful creatures.:) Great imagery..."flaming red against the snow" oh, the magestic cardinal! Keep well Daver! Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/14/2013 5:02:00 AM
I am glad I flew over to read this flock of haiku birdies. Well done Daver
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:48:00 AM
Daver wow great set of haiku's...David
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