Snowballs-Ws

snowballs compacted rolled up, stacked, frozen in place man’s jewels, a carrot and coal flurries cling to fur and shaken loose, tail wagging snowball’s freshly unfurling 1/9/2023 Winter Sedoka Sponsor: Charles Messina
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Gasun Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 4:50 AM
Excellent sedoka with fantastic imagery my dear friend Kim. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Thank you, Len! Glad you enjoyed!
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 6:30 AM
I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Adorable, Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/fun write. Now we need some hot chocolate to warm it with. Doggy needs rubs. Have a great day..............
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 8:22 PM
LOL…thanks :)
Messina Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 4:43 AM
Oops! Kim, I adored this poem. Unfortunately, you had one too many syllables in "Man's jewels, a carrot and coal" (8) Thanks for entering my contest...Congratulations on your placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:12 AM
You are right, Charles! I should have remembered that jewels has 3 syllables or put the poem through howmanysyllables! But thank you nonetheless for “adoring” it!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:33 AM
Good luck in the contest, Kim. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Thank you!
George Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Beautiful images of winter. Lovely twin haikus, dear Kim. All the Best in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for the visits. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Eslinger Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Hmmm. My muse had me writing about snowballs last night too. An entirely diff context tho. This piece gave me quite an Aha! moment. It works its Images to equal an ineffable feeling. I am amazed and ready to go in for cocos. Who let the dog out in the first place? Hmmm, sally
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 9:22 AM
LOL…you have me chuckling!
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