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I heard the tale of snow white That she was the most beautiful girl alive No doubt with face as white as snow and lips red like rose But do you know that she was addicted to drugs? Logic and conspiracies tell so The elfs were really clever, they would give her drugs And in return different men could touch her You see that it was a source of income for them The apple her step mother gave her was full of cocaine It was so wonderful that her heart exploded so did her brain And a drug addict she became Since she was living in disguise She wasn't having the money So she make a deal with elfs and present herself sweet as honey But one day came a prince, who with her wife was pissed Impressed by her beauty, he gave her a kiss Don't think of him as a innocent guy,he told his wife a lie And came here to see the most beautiful girl alive Otherwise who kiss a sleeping girl infront of seven elfs? Snow white woke up to a stranger giving her a kiss But it was okay, coz he was hot and fit That day she also fell in love The prince told her about her strict wife Her rules and how miserable was his life So Snow white promised to leave drugs And live a life which was of love She is that girl because of which a prince divorced his wife So they started to live together happily for the rest of their lives The elf then started a different business of Mary Her purpose was to flirt Mary had a little skirt, little skirt Which were having holes from the sides Because of which people could see her thighs One of her skirts were having hole in front But elfs were clever, unfortunately she doesn't wore it often It was for special foreigners Unfortunately Mary one day found a lamb So today we read that Mary had a little lamb And Now Mary work in a different program
9 july 2018 For the contest "Amuse me with your rhyme" Sponsor" Nick Trim"

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Date: 9/12/2018 12:49:00 PM
Well. I can honestly say this is not the Snow White I remember. You really used your imagination to put an unusual twist to it. Interestingly enough. Since I lost a daughter to drugs and alcohol I can't help but like the one of innocence. I hope you have a great day.
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Date: 8/1/2018 8:43:00 AM
That’s quite the twist on an old tale. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/30/2018 4:10:00 PM
Especially smiling at last 2 lines, Faraz!
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Date: 7/14/2018 4:23:00 PM
This is an eye opening poem that uses taboo imagery to paint a story with flames of emotion and poetic flare. Emile.
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Date: 7/11/2018 10:28:00 AM
Wow! Faraz, You have penned quite the tale. I have never heard snow white like this before. Bravo to you for going there . It was twisted but I must say I enjoyed every bit of it from start to finish. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/10/2018 11:45:00 PM
Well this is quite different Lol, 10 for imagination Faraz. Good luck in the contest young man....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/10/2018 10:38:00 AM
Boy you really do have an imagination. You boldly go where no man have ever gone before. ----Excellent my friend
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:34:00 PM
That is quite the fairy tale, Faraz. This reminds me of twisted fairy tales, the type of tales a guy came up with and wrote a new book of them!
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:05:00 PM
Interesting write
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:16:00 PM
Interesting take on this fairy tale Faraz.. A tip for you, when doing a rhyming poem, make sure you have a clear rhyming scheme.
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Date: 7/10/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks alot for your comment and wonderful advise, I will definitely work on it,