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Snow Song



soft snowflakes swirl down
wintry wind whirls through white trees
cool cardinal croons



01.16.2022



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For Tania Kitchin's "Winter Haiku" contest

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John Watt

Date: 1/20/2022 5:25:00 PM

Jo, a delightful wintry haiku snapshot of God's creation... love the alliteration and the imagery. Congrats for your #1 placement ~ John

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2022 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Few words make a pretty story. I love cardinals. Have the Have a blessed day....................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2022 6:05:00 PM

So delightful Jo. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 1/18/2022 4:10:00 PM

Excellent entry in the contest, Jo. I love the added alliteration in each line. Smiles and blessings, my friend, Bill

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2022 12:00:00 PM

I love the visual of the white snow and the red cardinal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/18/2022 5:16:00 AM

This is such a beautiful Haiku with alliteration Jo, loved it...Hugs...~ Ani

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/18/2022 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations Jo on your win! Love how you incorporated alliteration in your haiku! :) Paulette

Terry Miller

Date: 1/18/2022 12:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, great alliteration too.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/17/2022 7:17:00 PM

A big congratulations to you on your top win, Jo! You used alliteration, too ! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/17/2022 2:22:00 PM

I love this Jo. I can envision this brave little cardinal enduring the cold. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2022 11:57:00 AM

Congrats on you top win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2022 11:46:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku, Jo :) - Congratulations on your top winning place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2022 8:56:00 AM

Wonderful alliteration, beautiful picture, Jo. Love the contrast between the white snow and scarlet cardinal, the winter wind and the winter song of the cardinal. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/17/2022 8:55:00 AM

WoW! Jo, Your photo imagery and content are lovely. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day-Alexis