Joanna Daniel Poet Haiku

Snow Song

soft snowflakes swirl down
wintry wind whirls through white trees
cool cardinal croons



01.16.2022



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For Tania Kitchin's "Winter Haiku" contest

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John Watt January 20, 2022 at 5:25 PM Jo, a delightful wintry haiku snapshot of God's creation... love the alliteration and the imagery. Congrats for your #1 placement ~ John

Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2022 at 7:51 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Few words make a pretty story. I love cardinals. Have the Have a blessed day....................

Connie Marcum Wong January 18, 2022 at 6:05 PM So delightful Jo. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker January 18, 2022 at 4:10 PM Excellent entry in the contest, Jo. I love the added alliteration in each line. Smiles and blessings, my friend, Bill

Kim Merryman January 18, 2022 at 12:00 PM I love the visual of the white snow and the red cardinal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anitha Jayasankar January 18, 2022 at 5:16 AM This is such a beautiful Haiku with alliteration Jo, loved it...Hugs...~ Ani

Paulette Calasibetta January 18, 2022 at 5:12 AM Congratulations Jo on your win! Love how you incorporated alliteration in your haiku! :) Paulette

Terry Miller January 18, 2022 at 12:50 AM Congratulations on your win, great alliteration too.

Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:17 PM A big congratulations to you on your top win, Jo! You used alliteration, too ! :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2022 at 2:22 PM I love this Jo. I can envision this brave little cardinal enduring the cold. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2022 at 11:57 AM Congrats on you top win!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2022 at 11:46 AM - Beautiful haiku, Jo :) - Congratulations on your top winning place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman January 17, 2022 at 8:56 AM Wonderful alliteration, beautiful picture, Jo. Love the contrast between the white snow and scarlet cardinal, the winter wind and the winter song of the cardinal. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings!

Alexis Y. January 17, 2022 at 8:55 AM WoW! Jo, Your photo imagery and content are lovely. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day-Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna January 17, 2022 at 8:37 AM Congrats on your top win! Lovely alliteration!

Ann Peck January 17, 2022 at 8:36 AM Dear Jo, Congratulations for a beautiful poem and First Place win :)

Tania Kitchin January 17, 2022 at 8:17 AM Jo, congratulations on your first placement with your beautiful poem, loved the imagery and could hear the cardinal!

Mike Bayles January 16, 2022 at 7:16 PM Very nice, Jo

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2022 at 5:31 PM beautiful alliteration here.

Vijay Pandit January 16, 2022 at 6:44 AM Beautiful images adorning winter. All the best, Jo.

Tom Cunningham January 16, 2022 at 6:31 AM Perfect winter image Jo, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar January 16, 2022 at 5:17 AM Lovely song for a winter haiku. Best for a win.