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snow song

soft snowflakes swirl down wintry wind whirls through white trees cool cardinal croons 01.16.2022
Syllables counted with howmanysyllables.com For Tania Kitchin's "Winter Haiku" contest

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Date: 1/20/2022 5:25:00 PM
Jo, a delightful wintry haiku snapshot of God's creation... love the alliteration and the imagery. Congrats for your #1 placement ~ John
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Date: 1/19/2022 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Few words make a pretty story. I love cardinals. Have the Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 1/18/2022 6:05:00 PM
So delightful Jo. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/18/2022 4:10:00 PM
Excellent entry in the contest, Jo. I love the added alliteration in each line. Smiles and blessings, my friend, Bill
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Date: 1/18/2022 12:00:00 PM
I love the visual of the white snow and the red cardinal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/18/2022 5:16:00 AM
This is such a beautiful Haiku with alliteration Jo, loved it...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 1/18/2022 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Jo on your win! Love how you incorporated alliteration in your haiku! :) Paulette
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Date: 1/18/2022 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, great alliteration too.
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Date: 1/17/2022 7:17:00 PM
A big congratulations to you on your top win, Jo! You used alliteration, too ! :)
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Date: 1/17/2022 2:22:00 PM
I love this Jo. I can envision this brave little cardinal enduring the cold. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/17/2022 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on you win! A wonderful haiku.
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Date: 1/17/2022 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on you top win!
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Date: 1/17/2022 11:46:00 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Jo :) - Congratulations on your top winning place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2022 8:56:00 AM
Wonderful alliteration, beautiful picture, Jo. Love the contrast between the white snow and scarlet cardinal, the winter wind and the winter song of the cardinal. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings!
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Date: 1/17/2022 8:55:00 AM
WoW! Jo, Your photo imagery and content are lovely. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 1/17/2022 8:37:00 AM
Congrats on your top win! Lovely alliteration!
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Date: 1/17/2022 8:36:00 AM
Dear Jo, Congratulations for a beautiful poem and First Place win :)
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Date: 1/17/2022 8:17:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your first placement with your beautiful poem, loved the imagery and could hear the cardinal!
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Date: 1/16/2022 7:16:00 PM
Very nice, Jo
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Date: 1/16/2022 5:31:00 PM
beautiful alliteration here.
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Date: 1/16/2022 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful images adorning winter. All the best, Jo.
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Date: 1/16/2022 6:31:00 AM
Perfect winter image Jo, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/16/2022 5:17:00 AM
Lovely song for a winter haiku. Best for a win.
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