Snow Sonata

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Poetry/Free Verse/Snow Sonata
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1601-843-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 02, 2023For the International Contest, Winter Sonata
sponsor, JCB, Judged 12/14/2023

Ninth Place

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my beloved 'Snow' calls my name his whisper soft he waits for me deep in the forest with white hair of falling snowflakes I surrender and abandon my heart breathless captivated I run to him as winter clouds swirl above and snow veiled trees hang sleepy in a scene of quiet serenity he waits by an ice blue stream where snowflakes are saturated with magical lights and a winter blue bird sings sweetly cold arms wrap around me and we are swirling and dancing in this surreal twirling love his ardent strokes caress my hair he touches my lips with his frozen fingers taking me on a romantic stroll oh, I so desire to see his face but he always hides it he enfolds me until his feather fingers fade and melt away but this eternal love is my forever and each time snowflakes fall he calls my name . . .

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Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 2:28:00 PM

A lovely poem my friend..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2023 4:18:00 PM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/14/2023 4:13:00 PM

This mesmerizing Sonata of love is so unforgettable, Constance. I so love these parting lines: “ and each time snowflakes fall he calls my name . . .” Congratulations !

Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2023 9:06:00 AM

Jcb, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and the compliment and congratulations, blessings