Snow So Warm

Ah such breasts, as smooth white silk
to my lips they taste as cream,
off-piste slopes, to nipple’s milk,
when I kiss, your face does beam,
comes your passion, comes your scream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 28, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Peter,, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Austin Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Love your version of the heavenly mountains.Congrats, daver
Austin Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Yes, the erotic passion. Congrats, daver
Duncan Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Very nice win Peter :)
A  Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Peter Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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June 30, 2015 at 3:47 PM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 10:28 PM
WOW, I really like this one!!! More passionate than mine, but we were both for romance!! Congrats on the win.
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June 24, 2015 at 10:51 PM
good luck to make us scream but the cream I lick to please after a good run on the piste
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