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Written on December 16, 2023

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Snow, silent and breathless, Trembles on the shadows, Across the peaks, on mountains Where still, calm frost weeps. Snow, hushed as the rumors, Rustling in the quiet rays, Embracing the morning, gentling Swaying, dancing in reflections. Snow, muzzling the wings, Wrens and robins, wild and free, Gliding through the flakes, Feathery soft whispers, like praise. Snow, crisp yet muted, Promising the lingering joy Faith will arise in the moments, Just before the blustery twilight. Snow, shadowed by crests, Ridges silhouetted in crimson, Slow winds, conspiring with grace, Abundant like the music of laughter. Snow, risking the zeniths, Trailing through the song, Stirring blazing beams of love, Throughout the moments, hesitant. Snow, clever as the moon, Shimmering over the summits, Rousing joy inside the one who knows… Snow, snow, yes – snow sings of peace Peace that reassures the heart who hopes, Peace that calms the soul who yearns, Peace that colors the world in fresh promises. Peace so sincere it feels soft as snow’s sinking… Quietly releasing a glimpse of angel’s blinking. Keep dreaming and believing… like the snow, Never stop kissing away the dust with the beauty A completely new earth, frozen by the glistening flakes, the shimmering thoughts… from grace, Poured out over the night, like a gentle smile.

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Date: 12/17/2023 8:13:00 AM
so much imagery... such an excellent poem.. loved so many verses in this one..
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Date: 12/16/2023 4:34:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed the imagery of snow that you created. Every line was exquisite so I had trouble picking out my favorite one. This one stood out for your intertwined faith into it. Snow, crisp yet muted, Promising the lingering joy Faith will arise in the moments, Just before the blustery twilight. You have a true gift of interlacing your images with aspects of faith, peace, and joy. Well done, Gina. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/16/2023 2:45:00 PM
Magical and enchanting. My favorite lines "Gliding through the flakes, Feathery soft whispers, like praise." Such a beauty. Thanks for sharing.
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