Snow On the Flowers

Snow on the Flowers


Take this statue; I want
Someone with you all the time.
Our Lady of Fatima is cold.
This place is cold.

Isn’t snow in spring
The way it’s supposed to be?
Weren’t you spring?
Eagerly on the brink

Never to be explained
Except here where Our Lady
Stands frozen in time with you
Waiting for the snow to melt.

©Kathryn McL. Collins
February 12  , 2004

We placed a statue of Our Lady of Fatima at my daughter's grave.
And of course a cat. We thought the cat made sense and so did
our Jeannie I'm sure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/26/2013 1:08:00 AM
Kathryn: How exquisitely sad....sometimes there are no words, and yet you found some. Condolences for your sad loss. Love, SuZ
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne. I appreciate the sympathetic ears. love, Kathy
Date: 12/16/2013 10:03:00 AM
Even the title, has drawn a poignant picture. The postscript just breaks my heart for your loss.. I'm speechless with the right words to say. God Bless
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/26/2013 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Carrie - it's a tough thing to go through and tough for others to help. She died in 1995. - age 21. love, Kathy
Date: 12/11/2013 7:30:00 PM
Sorry about your daughter. Not so sure about the cat but I am sure I am missing something here. Don't wait for the snow to melt. Get a hair dryer and melt it yourself. ~Kilmer
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/12/2013 1:19:00 AM
I am so sorry. I didn't mean to make light of your daughter death. Please accept my apology. I feel like such a jerk. I didn't realize....~Kilmer
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/11/2013 8:51:00 PM
It's not clear, cryptic I'm sure. Death is hard and cold and never melts. Jeannie was young to die - it snowed, froze early that year. She had a cat but not religion. If I try to explain, it will just get murkier. It's only grief - makes no sense. Pretty grim - sad. No outlets in the graveyard to plug in a hair dryer. love, Kathy
Date: 12/8/2013 3:45:00 PM
Love this and the sentiments of it. What you said at the bottom made it even better for me.
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/10/2013 7:52:00 PM
sentiment is mild. love, you Kathy'
Date: 12/6/2013 2:55:00 PM
This is a personal poem that brought me sadness and empathy, Frederic
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/10/2013 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Frederic It was the saddest of times. love, Kathy
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